Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Tente estruturar a resposta de forma mais clara e natural, usando frases completas e conectores para ligar as ideias. Evite erros gramaticais e use vocabulário mais apropriado, por exemplo, diga "I usually go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can borrow books cheaply."

예시: Yes, I usually go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can focus. Also, borrowing books there is cheaper than buying them.

제안: Procure responder com frases completas e claras, usando tempos verbais corretos e conectores para organizar as ideias. Por exemplo, diga "I usually take some books to read and focus on them after relaxing. This helps me learn new things."

예시: I usually take some books to read and focus on them after relaxing. This helps me learn new things.

제안: Melhore a gramática e a estrutura da frase, usando o passado corretamente e conectores para explicar melhor. Por exemplo, diga "Yes, I did. Sometimes my mother brought me to the library because I loved reading books, and she helped me find them."

예시: Yes, I did. Sometimes my mother brought me to the library because I loved reading books, and she helped me find them.

제안: Evite repetir palavras e use frases mais naturais e completas. Por exemplo, diga "I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese kids go to the library because education is very important in China."

예시: I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese kids go to the library because education is very important in China.

× I go to library usually because I like a quick place.

✓ I usually go to the library because I like a quiet place.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'quick' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'quiet' to describe a peaceful place.

× I can borrow books also because it's really cheaper.

✓ I can also borrow books because it's really cheap.

The adverb 'also' should be placed before the verb 'borrow' for correct emphasis. Additionally, 'cheaper' is a comparative adjective and needs a comparison object; 'cheap' is appropriate here.

× Usually I took some book read focus this book after relaxing time and.

✓ Usually I take some books to read and focus on them after relaxing.

The verb tense should be present tense 'take' to match the habitual action. Also, the sentence structure is incomplete and needs correction for clarity.

× Learn new things.

✓ I learn new things.

This is a sentence fragment missing the subject. Adding 'I' completes the sentence.

× Sometimes my mother bring me the library because I loved reading book and she helped me found.

✓ Sometimes my mother brought me to the library because I loved reading books and she helped me find them.

The verb 'bring' should be in past tense 'brought' to match the past context. 'Book' should be plural 'books'. 'Found' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'find' in this context.

× Sometimes my mother bring me the library because I loved reading book and she helped me found.

✓ Sometimes my mother brought me to the library because I loved reading books and she helped me find them.

The preposition 'to' is needed after 'brought me' to indicate direction towards the library. Also, 'the library' is correct here as a specific place.

× Sometimes my mother bring me the library because I loved reading book and she helped me found.

✓ Sometimes my mother brought me to the library because I loved reading books and she helped me find them.

The pronoun 'them' is needed to refer back to 'books' as the object of 'find'.

× I don't know, never heard about this.

✓ I don't know; I've never heard about this.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' in the second clause and needs proper punctuation.

× I think yes, because they they are really good education.

✓ I think yes, because they have really good education.

The phrase 'good education' does not require 'the'. Also, the verb 'have' is needed to express possession.