Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it helps me concentrate better on my studies. Sometimes, I go with my friends to study together.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và giải thích rõ hơn về hoạt động của mình trong thư viện.

예시: I usually study in the library because it is quiet and helps me focus. Sometimes, I meet my classmates there to discuss our assignments.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không trả lời đúng câu hỏi và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, nói về việc bạn có đến thư viện khi còn nhỏ hay không và giải thích ngắn gọn.

예시: No, I did not often go to the library when I was a kid because there were not many libraries near my home. Instead, my mother helped me study at home.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không trả lời đúng câu hỏi và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp về thói quen của trẻ em Trung Quốc khi đến thư viện và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

예시: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library to study and read books because education is very important in China.

× Yes, I usually go to the library with my friends or only because I can focus on subject and what effect.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the library with my friends or alone because I can focus on subjects and their effects.

The conjunction 'or only' is incorrect; it should be 'or alone' to express the alternative. Also, 'subject' should be plural 'subjects' to match the context, and 'what effect' is unclear and corrected to 'their effects' to refer to the effects of studying subjects.

× I usually study or meet in the library or I can focus on study and insolatory effects.

✓ I usually study or meet in the library because I can focus on studying and solitary effects.

The conjunction 'or' is incorrectly used twice; the second 'or' should be 'because' to show reason. 'Focus on study' should be 'focus on studying' to use the gerund form after 'focus on'. 'Insolatory' is a misspelling of 'solitary'.

× How did you go to the library? When I worked because in my country I didn't see any black clothing and I want to learn in my home with my mother. Uh, she helped me in my study.

✓ How did you go to the library? When I was a child, I didn't go because in my country I didn't see any black clothing, and I wanted to learn at home with my mother. She helped me with my studies.

The sentence is confusing and lacks proper structure. 'When I worked' is incorrect; it should be 'When I was a child'. 'I didn't see any black clothing' is unclear and likely incorrect in context; it is kept but may be a misunderstanding. 'I want' should be past tense 'I wanted' to match past context. 'In my home' should be 'at home'. 'Helped me in my study' should be 'helped me with my studies'.

× I didn't yet because Chiller is a developed country and I see the young people in the Chile is very hard study.

✓ I haven't yet because Chile is a developing country, and I see that young people in Chile study very hard.

'I didn't yet' is incorrect; it should be 'I haven't yet' for present perfect tense. 'Chiller' is a misspelling of 'Chile'. 'Is a developed country' is incorrect; Chile is a developing country. 'I see the young people in the Chile is very hard study' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'I see that young people in Chile study very hard'.