Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha kısa ve net tutarak, gereksiz tekrar ve karışıklıklardan kaçının. Örneğin, kütüphaneye gitmeme nedenlerinizi açık ve mantıklı bir şekilde belirtin ve destekleyici detaylar ekleyin.

예시: I don't often go to the library because I have a small library at home. Also, I prefer going to the park since the public library is often dirty and uncomfortable, and it lacks computers for use.

제안: Cevabınızı genişletmek için daha fazla detay ekleyin ve bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi zenginleştirin. Ayrıca, dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı açısından daha doğru ifadeler tercih edin.

예시: Usually, I just read books in the library because it is a quiet place. Sometimes, I also study or do research for my assignments there.

제안: Cevabınızı daha açık ve detaylı yapmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi tamamlayarak ve bağlaçlar kullanarak daha akıcı hale getirin. Yasal kısıtlamayı daha net açıklayın.

예시: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because there is a rule that people under 16 are not allowed to enter. Therefore, I had to wait until I was older to visit the library.

제안: Bu soruya daha uygun ve kibar bir şekilde cevap vermelisiniz. Bilginiz yoksa bunu belirtip, genel bir görüş sunabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, olumsuz ifadelerden kaçının ve daha nötr bir dil kullanın.

예시: I'm not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library, but I think many children enjoy reading and studying there because libraries are good places for learning.

× Library No, because I have a library in my house and usually I go to park and I don't love the library for all of the people because it's so dirty and it's so uncomfortable.

✓ No, because I have a library in my house and usually I go to the park and I don't love the library because it is so dirty and uncomfortable for all the people.

The definite article 'the' is missing before 'park' and 'library' when referring to specific places. Also, the phrase 'for all of the people' is awkward and unnecessary here; 'for all the people' is more natural.

× Actually, I just read book, that's all.

✓ Actually, I just read books, that's all.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because the speaker refers to reading in general, not a single book. Also, the article 'a' is missing if singular is intended, but plural is more appropriate here.

× No, I didn't, because there's a law about the library.

✓ No, I didn't, because there is a law about the library.

The contraction 'there's' is informal and can be ambiguous; expanding it to 'there is' improves clarity and formality.

× You cannot go to library before 16.

✓ You cannot go to the library before you are 16.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'before 16' is incomplete; it should be 'before you are 16' or 'before the age of 16' for clarity.