Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, explain your work schedule and how it affects your library visits in a concise way.

예시: I don't go to the library very often because I work daily shifts, especially on weekends, so I need to rest during that time.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using linking words and more natural phrasing. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Try to provide specific details about your interest in history to enrich your answer.

예시: I usually read historical books in the library, especially about the history of Punjab and India, because I find these topics fascinating and enjoy learning about the past.

제안: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to make it coherent. Also, be specific about your experiences.

예시: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid because my college had a big library. I usually went there with my friends, and we preferred reading comic books for fun.

제안: Your answer is very brief and does not attempt to speculate or provide a thoughtful response. Even if you are unsure, try to give a general opinion or reason to show your speaking ability.

예시: I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese kids do go to the library because reading is encouraged in schools and at home.

× I do not go library often because I am a worker, so I have a daily shift at weekend I have to take rest but.

✓ I do not go to the library often because I am a worker, so I have a daily shift on weekends and I have to rest.

The preposition 'to' is required before 'the library' to indicate direction or destination. Also, 'at weekend' should be 'on weekends' to correctly express time. Additionally, the sentence structure was improved for clarity and correctness.

× I often go to a library to read historical books such as history of Punjab and India.

✓ I often go to the library to read historical books such as the history of Punjab and India.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'the' is required before 'history' to specify the particular history being discussed.

× That is why I go library.

✓ That is why I go to the library.

The preposition 'to' is necessary before 'the library' to indicate the place being visited.

× When I was good, I often went to library because in my college there was a big library.

✓ When I was young, I often went to the library because in my college there was a big library.

The phrase 'was good' is incorrect in this context; 'was young' correctly refers to childhood. Also, 'to library' should be 'to the library' with the definite article.

× When I was good, I often went to library because in my college there was a big library.

✓ When I was young, I often went to the library because in my college there was a big library.

As above, 'to the library' requires the preposition 'to' and the definite article 'the'.

× So are you fun? Went there with my friends.

✓ So, it was fun. I went there with my friends.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'So, it was fun' correctly expresses enjoyment, and 'I went there with my friends' is a complete sentence with subject and verb.

× So on that day we gave more preference to the comic books.

✓ So on that day, we gave more preference to comic books.

The article 'the' before 'comic books' is unnecessary when speaking generally. Also, a comma after 'day' improves readability.