Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct prepositions ('to the library'), avoid repeating words ('or or'), and make your sentences more concise. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I don't go to the library very often. Usually, I visit only when I need to borrow or return books. However, these days I mostly access library resources online, so I rarely go there in person.

제안: Your answer repeats phrases and lacks coherence. Try to avoid repetition and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, complete your sentences fully and provide specific details to enrich your answer.

예시: In the library, I enjoy reading new magazines and newspapers, which are my passion. Additionally, I look for books that match my interests, and if I find a good one, I borrow it from the library staff.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Use past tense consistently and clarify your ideas. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to make your sentences more natural and fluent.

예시: When I was a child, I didn't visit a public library because there wasn't one in my hometown. However, I often used the small school library, which had materials suitable for children.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct articles ('the library'), plural forms ('children's fiction'), and linking words to improve coherence. Also, be more specific in your explanation.

예시: Yes, Chinese children often visit the library because it offers many resources they enjoy. For example, they can play online games and borrow children's fiction and cartoon books, which makes the library a popular place for them.

× I do not go library very often.

✓ I do not go to the library very often.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' when indicating a destination. Omitting 'to' before 'library' is incorrect. Always use 'go to' when referring to going somewhere.

× I usually go library when I need to borrow some book or or I need to return it.

✓ I usually go to the library when I need to borrow some books or I need to return them.

Again, 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before 'library'. Also, 'some book' should be plural 'some books' because 'some' is used with plural countable nouns. 'Or or' is a repetition error and should be corrected to a single 'or'. 'It' should be 'them' to agree with the plural 'books'.

× Yeah, nowadays I am accessing library resources online, so I do not need to go in person in library.

✓ Yeah, nowadays I am accessing library resources online, so I do not need to go in person to the library.

The phrase 'go in person in library' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'to' before 'the library'. Also, 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place.

× Yes they do, because in library there are many resources that children like to visit.

✓ Yes, they do, because in the library there are many resources that children like to use.

The phrase 'in library' requires the definite article 'the' to specify the place. Also, 'children like to visit' is awkward; 'children like to use' or 'children like to visit the library' would be better. Here, changing 'visit' to 'use' fits better with 'resources'.

× I usually go library when I need to borrow some book or or I need to return it.

✓ I usually go to the library when I need to borrow some books or I need to return them.

'Some book' is incorrect because 'book' is countable and singular, but 'some' is used with plural nouns. It should be 'some books'. Also, pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to agree with plural 'books'.

× Newspaper is also my passion.

✓ Newspapers are also my passion.

'Newspaper' is singular, but here it refers to the general concept or multiple items, so plural 'newspapers' is appropriate. Also, plural verb 'are' agrees with plural subject.

× If I find a good one, then I borrow it from the library staff and sometimes.

✓ If I find a good one, then I borrow it from the library staff sometimes.

The phrase 'and sometimes' at the end is incomplete and awkward. Moving 'sometimes' to before the period clarifies the meaning. Also, no preposition error here but sentence structure is improved.

× In my childhood, I didn't have any experience to visit library because there was no library in my hometown.

✓ In my childhood, I didn't have any experience visiting the library because there was no library in my hometown.

The phrase 'experience to visit' is incorrect. The correct form is 'experience visiting' (gerund form). Also, 'the library' requires the definite article.

× I usually have experience in my school library that was small library and having kids material there.

✓ I usually had experience in my school library, which was a small library and had kids' materials there.

'Usually have experience' is awkward in past context; 'usually had experience' fits better. 'That was small library' needs an article 'a small library'. 'Having kids material' should be 'had kids' materials' to be grammatically correct and possessive.

× They can play online games in the library and also borrow some child fictions and cartoon books there.

✓ They can play online games in the library and also borrow some children's fiction and cartoon books there.

'Child fictions' is incorrect; the correct term is 'children's fiction' to indicate fiction for children. Also, 'children's' is possessive form.