Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Use articles properly and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I often go to the library during my free time because I love reading books."

예시: I often go to the library during my free time because I love reading books. It helps me relax and learn new things.

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar. For example, "I usually read books or study in the library because it is peaceful and quiet, which helps me concentrate."

예시: I usually read books or study in the library because it is peaceful and quiet, which helps me concentrate better.

제안: Improve sentence structure and use linking words. For example, "Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid because it was near my house, and I enjoyed reading different children's stories there."

예시: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid because it was near my house, and I enjoyed reading different children's stories there.

제안: Try to answer the question even if you are not sure. You can give your opinion or say what you think. For example, "I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese kids go to the library to study and read books."

예시: I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese kids go to the library to study and read books because libraries are important for learning.

× Yes, I often go to library every free time because I really love to read books.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library every free time because I really love to read books.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. So, 'to library' should be corrected to 'to the library'. This is a common article error.

× Yes, I often go to library every free time because I really love to read books.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library in every free time because I really love to read books.

The phrase 'every free time' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'in' when referring to periods of free time, so it should be 'in every free time'. Alternatively, 'in my free time' or 'whenever I have free time' would be more natural.

× I read books there or I use study because my brain will function if if it is peaceful.

✓ I read books there or I study because my brain will function if it is peaceful.

The phrase 'I use study' is incorrect; 'study' is a verb and does not need 'use' before it. Also, there is a repeated word 'if if' which is a typographical error. The correct sentence is 'I read books there or I study because my brain will function if it is peaceful.'

× As we all know library don't have or don't make any noises.

✓ As we all know, the library doesn't have or doesn't make any noises.

The subject 'library' is singular, so the verb should be 'doesn't' instead of 'don't'. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Hence, 'library don't have' should be 'the library doesn't have'.

× So I go there to study to read books also.

✓ So I go there to study and to read books as well.

The original sentence lacks proper conjunction and parallel structure. Using 'and' connects the two purposes clearly, and 'as well' is more natural than 'also' at the end. This improves sentence clarity and flow.

× Yes, because our house or where I live is near to the library so I go there to read different stories for kids.

✓ Yes, because our house, or where I live, is near the library, so I go there to read different stories for kids.

The preposition 'near' does not require 'to' after it. Also, commas are added for clarity. So 'near to the library' should be 'near the library'.

× Yes, because our house or where I live is near to the library so I go there to read different stories for kids.

✓ Yes, because our house, or where I live, is near the library, so I go there to read different stories for kids.

The sentence is a run-on and needs commas to separate clauses for clarity. Adding commas after 'house' and 'library' improves readability.