Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "it's my favorite hobbies" should be "it's my favorite hobby" or "they are my favorite hobbies." Also, listing book genres should be smoother and more natural. Try to use complete sentences and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because I love reading. It's one of my favorite hobbies. I especially enjoy history books, comedies, and romantic novels.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and could be more concise. For example, "more than one books" should be "more than one book," and "it make me more relaxed" should be "it makes me more relaxed." Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: When I go to the library, I usually read several books. Also, I like to drink coffee because it helps me relax and think about what I have read.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. "It's my favorite hobby since when I was a child" should be "It has been my favorite hobby since I was a child." Try to use the correct tense and more natural expressions.

예시: Yes, I did. Going to the library has been my favorite hobby since I was a child.

제안: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear words. For example, "Chinese kid" should be "Chinese kids," and "enemies" seems to be a mistake, possibly you meant "games." Also, try to provide more specific reasons and use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I don't think Chinese kids often go to the library because they prefer using technology like phones, iPads, and watching movies or playing games instead.

× Yes I do because I love reading books and it's my favorite hobbies.

✓ Yes I do because I love reading books and it's my favorite hobby.

The word 'hobbies' is plural, but 'favorite' implies a singular noun. Since 'favorite' refers to one hobby, 'hobby' should be singular to match.

× I love reading history books, comedy and. Romantic Books.

✓ I love reading history books, comedy, and romantic books.

The list items should be consistent in form and properly punctuated. 'Romantic Books' should not be capitalized and the period after 'comedy' is incorrect. Also, 'comedy' here likely refers to comedy books or genres, so it should be parallel with the other items.

× When I go to the library I read more than one books and I drink my coffee because it make me more relaxed and I can think about what I read.

✓ When I go to the library I read more than one book and I drink my coffee because it makes me more relaxed and I can think about what I read.

The phrase 'more than one' should be followed by a singular noun 'book'. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× When I go to the library I read more than one books and I drink my coffee because it make me more relaxed and I can think about what I read.

✓ When I go to the library I read more than one book and I drink my coffee because it makes me more relaxed and I can think about what I read.

The verb 'make' must be in third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Yes I did because it's my favorite hobby since when I was a child.

✓ Yes I did because it was my favorite hobby since I was a child.

The phrase 'it's' (it is) is present tense, but the sentence refers to the past. 'It was' is correct. Also, 'since when' is incorrect; 'since' alone suffices.

× I think no because Chinese kid love technology like phone, iPad, television and watch movies, enemies and other.

✓ I think no because Chinese kids love technology like phones, iPads, televisions and watch movies, games and others.

The subject 'Chinese kid' should be plural 'Chinese kids' to match the plural verb 'love'. Also, 'phone', 'iPad', 'television' should be plural to match the context. 'Enemies' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'games'. 'Other' should be 'others'.