Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在重复词汇“also also”，且句子结构较为简单，建议避免重复并使用更丰富的词汇表达原因，同时注意语法准确性。

예시: Yes, I often go to the school library to complete my homework because it is quiet, which helps me concentrate better. Additionally, the library offers a wide range of resources that I cannot find at home.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“informations”应为“information”，且表达不够自然，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用恰当的词汇。

예시: I usually finish my homework in the library because it helps me focus. Moreover, I can access various news and resources there, which is very convenient.

제안: 句子中存在语法错误，如“that's important to reading”应为“it's important to read”，建议注意时态和固定搭配的正确使用，使表达更准确。

예시: Yes, when I was a child, I visited the library two or three times a week because my mother, who is a librarian, told me that it is important to read regularly.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“most of the library have”应为“most libraries have”，句子较长且断句不当，建议分句表达并注意语法一致性。

예시: There is no doubt that Chinese children often visit libraries. Most libraries organize activities to encourage a love of reading. Moreover, children enjoy reading various books, such as novels and picture books, which help improve their imagination.

× Yes of course I often go to school library to finish my homework because it's calm and it helps me concentrate easily and also also I can find many resource in the library that at home.

✓ Yes of course I often go to the school library to finish my homework because it's calm and it helps me concentrate easily and also I can find many resources in the library that I can't find at home.

resource 是可数名词，复数形式应为 resources；缺少定冠词 the；缺少主语 I；句子中 also 重复出现，应删除一个。

× As I said, I usually finish my homework in library because it can make me focus easily and also I can find many news and resources and informations in the library which make me convenient.

✓ As I said, I usually finish my homework in the library because it helps me focus easily and also I can find much news, resources, and information in the library which makes me feel convenient.

news 和 information 是不可数名词，不用复数形式；缺少定冠词 the；动词 make 与主语 which 不一致，应改为 makes；convenient 用作形容词，前面应加 feel 表示感受。

× Of course, when I was a kid, I went to the library about two or three times a week because my mother is a librarian and she told me that's important to reading.

✓ Of course, when I was a kid, I went to the library about two or three times a week because my mother was a librarian and she told me that it's important to read.

描述过去事实时，母亲的职业应使用过去时 was；动词不定式 to reading 应改为 to read。

× There's no doubt that Chinese kids often go to the library, and most of the library have activities to improve children's love of reading and moreover, children like to read a lot of books like novels and picture books, which can improve their. Imagination.

✓ There's no doubt that Chinese kids often go to the library, and most of the libraries have activities to improve children's love of reading. Moreover, children like to read a lot of books like novels and picture books, which can improve their imagination.

library 应使用复数形式 libraries；句子中 Imagination 前多余句号，应删除；句子结构应分开，使用句号分隔。