Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating words like "do" and use linking words to improve flow. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain why you go to the library.

예시: Yes, I usually go to the library daily because I am conducting research on genetic variability in oats. Therefore, I need to access journals and books that provide valuable information for my study.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Use linking words like "for example" or "also" to connect ideas and avoid repeating similar phrases. Try to be more specific about your activities.

예시: In the library, I usually read newspapers, reference books, and journals. For example, I research specific topics and sometimes discuss them with my friends. Most of the time, I focus on studying quietly to achieve my academic goals.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by structuring it better and using linking words. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes and be more concise.

예시: Yes, I remember going to the library at my school, DPS Panipat Refinery, which was quite small. I used to enjoy reading comic books there, especially the ones by Jeremy Stilton, which featured mice as characters.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and fluent. Use linking words like "because" and "therefore" properly, and correct grammar errors such as "library provide" to "library provides."

예시: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because it supports their academic excellence. Therefore, they use the library's resources and quiet environment to study and achieve their goals.

× Yes I do go to library do usually daily because I am doing my research on genetic variability in oats so I need resources from library like the journals and other books.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the library daily because I am doing my research on genetic variability in oats, so I need resources from the library like journals and other books.

The original sentence has redundant auxiliary verbs and incorrect word order. 'Do go' is unnecessary; 'usually' should come before the verb. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes I do go to library do usually daily because I am doing my research on genetic variability in oats so I need resources from library like the journals and other books.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the library daily because I am doing my research on genetic variability in oats, so I need resources from the library like journals and other books.

The noun 'library' is a specific place here and requires the definite article 'the'. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× In the library I usually read newspapers and the reference books and the journals and other books.

✓ In the library, I usually read newspapers, reference books, journals, and other books.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before plural nouns like 'reference books' and 'journals' when speaking generally. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural and grammatically correct.

× I usually research the books in the libraries and talk to my friends about the main topic that and discuss with them.

✓ I usually research books in the library and talk to my friends about the main topic and discuss it with them.

'The books' and 'the libraries' are incorrect here because the speaker refers generally to books and the library, not specific ones. Also, 'libraries' should be singular 'library' to match the context. The phrase 'discuss with them' needs an object, so 'it' is added for clarity.

× I usually research the books in the libraries and talk to my friends about the main topic that and discuss with them.

✓ I usually research books in the library and talk to my friends about the main topic and discuss it with them.

The original sentence is awkward and incomplete. The phrase 'about the main topic that' is unclear and incomplete. Adding 'it' after 'discuss' clarifies the object of discussion. Simplifying the sentence structure improves clarity.

× Most of the time I just sit and study and focus for my goals.

✓ Most of the time, I just sit, study, and focus on my goals.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect after 'focus'. The correct preposition is 'on' when referring to focusing attention or effort towards something.

× I do remember going to a library I studied in DPS Panipat refinery and they had a library.

✓ I do remember going to a library. I studied at DPS Panipat Refinery, and they had a library.

The sentence is a run-on and lacks punctuation. Also, 'in' should be 'at' when referring to studying at a school. Adding punctuation and correcting the preposition improves readability and grammar.

× I studied in DPS Panipat refinery and they had a library.

✓ I studied at DPS Panipat Refinery, and they had a library.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to attending a school or institution. The correct preposition is 'at'.

× It was so small.

✓ It was very small.

While 'so small' is not grammatically incorrect, 'very small' is more appropriate and natural in this context. This is a stylistic suggestion rather than a strict grammar correction.

× I used to study the comic books at that time and the book that I remember is of Jeremy Stilton which had a mice in it and all the books I loved about him.

✓ I used to read comic books at that time, and the book I remember is by Geronimo Stilton, which had mice in it. I loved all the books about him.

'Study the comic books' is incorrect; 'read' is the correct verb. 'The book that I remember is of Jeremy Stilton' is incorrect; it should be 'by Geronimo Stilton' (correct author name). 'Had a mice' is wrong because 'mice' is plural; it should be 'had mice'. The sentence is also run-on and needs to be split for clarity.

× So library provide them a quiet area to sit and study.

✓ So the library provides them a quiet area to sit and study.

'Library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Also, the verb should be 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'library'.

× So library provide them a quiet area to sit and study.

✓ So the library provides them a quiet area to sit and study.

The subject 'library' is singular, so the verb must be 'provides' to agree in third person singular form.