Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific details. Avoid unnecessary phrases like 'which is that?'. Use simple and clear sentences to express your ideas naturally.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library to borrow books for my studies. It helps me find reliable information that I cannot always access online.

제안: Your answer is a bit repetitive and some phrases are awkward. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, clarify your points with specific details and avoid redundancy.

예시: I usually go to the library during my free time at college. There, I complete my assignments and borrow books that are too expensive to buy online.

제안: Good answer with clear structure and relevant details. To improve, you can use linking words to make your answer more coherent and add a concluding sentence expressing your feelings or opinion.

예시: During my school days, we had a library period when teachers taught us how to behave and borrow books. I enjoyed the quiet atmosphere because it helped me focus and learn new things.

제안: Avoid starting your answer with uncertainty. Instead, give a general opinion confidently and support it with reasons. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

예시: Although I am not sure, I believe Chinese kids often go to the library at school because libraries are important for learning and research.

× Yes, I do go to the library to borrow some books which is required for academic purposes, which is that?

✓ Yes, I do go to the library to borrow some books which are required for academic purposes. What does that mean?

The pronoun 'which' is incorrectly used to refer to 'books' which is plural, so 'is' should be 'are'. Also, the phrase 'which is that?' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it is better to rephrase for clarity.

× I usually visit the library at the leisure period which is available during college hours.

✓ I usually visit the library during the leisure period which is available during college hours.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used with 'leisure period'; 'during' is the correct preposition to indicate a time period.

× I usually complete my assignments and records at the library and I borrow the books from the library, which is not affordable for me on the online websites.

✓ I usually complete my assignments and records at the library and I borrow books from the library, which are not affordable for me on online websites.

The pronoun 'which' refers to 'books' which is plural, so 'is' should be 'are'. Also, 'the books' is better as 'books' to generalize, and 'the online websites' should be 'online websites' without 'the'.

× Yeah, maybe I don't know the specific answer for this question as I am Indian but I think in their school also they may be going to library.

✓ Yeah, maybe I don't know the specific answer to this question as I am Indian but I think in their schools they may also be going to the library.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect with 'answer'; it should be 'answer to'. Also, 'school' should be plural 'schools' to generalize, and 'going to library' needs the definite article 'the' before 'library'. The adverb 'also' is better placed after 'may'.