Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói rõ hơn về tần suất và mục đích đi thư viện, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library, usually with my friend, to read books that help me improve my English skills.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác và lặp lại nhiều lần. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về hoạt động trong thư viện.

예시: When I have free time from school, I usually go to the library to borrow meaningful books related to my major. Besides reading, I sometimes rest there as well.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về thói quen khi còn nhỏ.

예시: Yes, when I was a kid, my school did not have a library, so I often studied outside or at home.

제안: Bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh sử dụng từ không phù hợp hoặc không rõ nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và cung cấp ý kiến hoặc thông tin cụ thể về thói quen đọc sách của trẻ em Trung Quốc.

예시: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because education is very important in China, and many children enjoy reading books there.

× I usually go to the library with my friend to read in this book which help me improve my English skill.

✓ I usually go to the library with my friend to read books which help me improve my English skills.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to multiple books in general. Also, 'skill' should be plural 'skills' to correctly refer to English abilities in general.

× I usually go to the library with my friend to read in this book which help me improve my English skill.

✓ I usually go to the library with my friend to read these books which help me improve my English skills.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; we read 'books' not 'in books'. Also, 'this' should be 'these' to match the plural 'books'.

× I usually go to, uh, the library to borrow many, uh, meaningful book, uh, related to my major.

✓ I usually go to the library to borrow many meaningful books related to my major.

The quantifier 'many' requires a plural noun, so 'book' should be 'books'.

× And beside, I usually go to the bar library to, uh, sleep.

✓ Besides, I usually go to the library to sleep.

The phrase 'And beside' is incorrect; it should be 'Besides'. Also, 'bar library' is likely a mistake; 'library' alone is appropriate.

× Oh yes I think I know when I wear a tire on my school didn't have a library for me to go so I usually go to the road to the scratch to learn and study on birth is.

✓ Oh yes, I think when I was a child, my school didn't have a library for me to go to, so I usually went to the street to learn and study on my own.

The sentence has multiple tense errors: 'wear a tire' should be 'was a child'; 'didn't have' is correct past tense; 'usually go' should be 'usually went' to match past context; 'road to the scratch' is unclear and corrected to 'street'; 'on birth is' is unclear and corrected to 'on my own'.

× Oh yes I think I know when I wear a tire on my school didn't have a library for me to go so I usually go to the road to the scratch to learn and study on birth is.

✓ Oh yes, I think when I was a child, my school didn't have a library for me to go to, so I usually went to the street to learn and study on my own.

The pronoun usage is unclear and incorrect; 'I wear a tire' is incorrect and replaced with 'I was a child'; 'on birth is' is unclear and replaced with 'on my own' to correctly express studying independently.

× Oh, when I wear a tie, I saw a entertainer Ram of power on education in China and I really admire their talent of gig in China because they usually drink a lot of books.

✓ Oh, when I was a child, I saw an entertainer talk about the power of education in China and I really admire their talent in China because they usually read a lot of books.

'wear a tie' should be 'was a child' to indicate past time; 'a entertainer' should be 'an entertainer'; 'Ram of power' is unclear and corrected to 'talk about the power'; 'talent of gig' is unclear and corrected to 'talent'; 'drink a lot of books' is incorrect and corrected to 'read a lot of books'.