Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences simpler and more direct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you go to the library with specific reasons.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it helps me gain knowledge on many subjects. Moreover, I can improve my skills and participate in extracurricular activities like listening and communicating with others.

제안: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and filler words like 'uh'. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to organize your answer. Be specific about what you read and how you communicate with others.

예시: In the library, I usually read books, articles, and novels. Additionally, I learn new things and discuss subject matters with other people there.

제안: Your answer is confusing and has many grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly. Use past tense correctly and avoid unnecessary words. For example, say whether you went to the library as a child and explain why or why not.

예시: No, I did not often go to the library when I was a kid because I preferred playing games and watching TV or movies.

제안: Your answer is unclear and off-topic. Try to answer the question directly. If you don't know, say so briefly, then give your opinion about children in your country. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition.

예시: I am not sure about Chinese kids, but in Nepal, children often go to the library to read. However, many also enjoy playing and watching movies.

× Yes I have one go to the library because in library I can get the knowledge of everything I want, I desires and also the library is the place where we can have a knowledge, skills and also the many other extracurricular activities like listening, communicating.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because in the library I can get knowledge of everything I want, my desires, and also the library is the place where we can gain knowledge, skills, and many other extracurricular activities like listening and communicating.

The sentence has singular and plural issues such as 'I have one go' which should be 'I often go', 'I desires' should be 'my desires', and 'a knowledge' should be 'knowledge' without article. Also, 'the many other' should be 'many other' without 'the'. In English, 'knowledge' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. Correct plural forms and article usage improve clarity.

× Yes I have one go to the library because in library I can get the knowledge of everything I want, I desires and also the library is the place where we can have a knowledge, skills and also the many other extracurricular activities like listening, communicating.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library because in the library I can get knowledge of everything I want, my desires, and also the library is the place where we can gain knowledge, skills, and many other extracurricular activities like listening and communicating.

The phrase 'in library' is missing the definite article 'the' and should be 'in the library'. Prepositions require correct article usage to be grammatically correct in English.

× I usually do reading my books, articles, novels and also uh, learn extra new things in the library and I also uh, communicate with others in the about subject matters in the library.

✓ I usually read my books, articles, novels and also learn extra new things in the library, and I also communicate with others about subject matters in the library.

The verb 'do reading' is incorrect; 'read' should be used instead. Also, 'in the about subject matters' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'about subject matters'. The verb 'do' is not needed before 'reading' here, and prepositions must be used correctly.

× More often, I do not go to the library when I was cute because at that time, at that age, we love playing games, watching TV's, movies and any other things except that ring. So I never.

✓ I did not often go to the library when I was a kid because at that time, at that age, we loved playing games, watching TV, movies, and other things except reading. So I never did.

The sentence mixes present tense 'do not go' with past time 'when I was'. It should be past tense 'did not go'. Also, 'cute' is incorrect; it should be 'kid'. 'Love' should be past tense 'loved' to match the past time frame. 'TV's' is incorrect plural; 'TV' is sufficient. 'Except that ring' is likely a mishearing of 'except reading'. The sentence ends abruptly; 'So I never did' completes the thought.

× Do Chinese kids often go to the library? About Chinese kid, I don't know what they do because I'm Nepali and I speak in Nepali. I know that the Nepali children's will really go to the library for reading because they love playing, watching movies and any other things. Except really.

✓ About Chinese kids, I don't know what they do because I'm Nepali and I speak Nepali. I know that Nepali children really go to the library for reading because they love playing, watching movies, and other things, except reading.

'Chinese kid' should be plural 'Chinese kids' to match the question. 'Nepali children's' is incorrect possessive; it should be 'Nepali children'. 'Any other things' should be 'other things'. The phrase 'Except really' is unclear and likely means 'except reading'. Correct plural forms and article usage are necessary for clarity.