Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Perbaiki penggunaan kata dan struktur kalimat agar lebih alami dan efektif. Misalnya, hindari kata yang salah seperti 'right library' dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih ringkas dan jelas.

예시: No, I don't go to the library often. This is only my second time here because I usually study at home or in the park.

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kata kerja yang tepat. Hindari pengulangan kata dan buat kalimat lebih alami dengan struktur yang benar.

예시: I usually spend my time in the library reading books and articles, or doing assignments and writing.

제안: Gunakan bentuk waktu yang tepat dan perbaiki pilihan kata agar kalimat lebih alami dan jelas.

예시: Of course, my parents always took me to the library to read books when I was a kid.

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kata yang tepat. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih lengkap dan jelas untuk menjawab pertanyaan.

예시: I'm not sure, but I often see Chinese kids going to the library.

× No, I don't often go to the right library and this is my second time going here.

✓ No, I don't often go to the library, and this is my second time coming here.

The adverb 'often' is correctly placed before the verb 'go'. However, 'right library' is incorrect; 'right' is unnecessary here. Also, 'going here' is better expressed as 'coming here' to indicate arrival. The sentence is improved by removing 'right' and adjusting the phrase for clarity.

× I usually spend my time in the library to to reading books, articles or doing some task or writing.

✓ I usually spend my time in the library reading books, articles, doing some tasks, or writing.

After 'spend my time', the verb should be in the '-ing' form without 'to'. The phrase 'to to reading' is incorrect; it should be 'reading'. Also, 'some task' should be pluralized to 'some tasks' to match the context.

× Of course, my parents always take me to the library to read about books.

✓ Of course, my parents always took me to the library to read books.

The question refers to the past ('when you were a kid'), so the verb 'take' should be in the past tense 'took'. Also, 'read about books' is incorrect; it should be 'read books'.

× I don't know, but oftenly I saw them.

✓ I don't know, but I often saw them.

'Oftenly' is not a correct adverb form; the correct adverb is 'often'. Also, the adverb 'often' should be placed before the verb 'saw' for correct adverb placement.