Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Use correct articles like 'the library' and avoid redundancy. Also, improve sentence structure and grammar for clarity. For example, instead of 'I often visit library because of my interest that I have in reading fictional and more scientific books,' say 'I often visit the library because I enjoy reading both fiction and scientific books.'

예시: Yes, I often visit the library because I enjoy reading both fiction and scientific books. When I was a child, I used to go to small libraries to read cartoon books. Now, I prefer books that provide practical knowledge applicable in real life.

제안: Focus on giving a clear and direct answer. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid unclear phrases like 'I never said at home.' Also, correct article usage and verb tenses will improve clarity.

예시: I usually go to the library to complete my work. However, since I don't have much work these days, I mostly read fiction and scientific books there. Therefore, I always visit the library to gain knowledge and experience.

제안: Improve grammar and sentence structure for clarity. Use past tense consistently when talking about the past. Avoid vague phrases like 'as it' and clarify your points. Also, keep answers concise and relevant.

예시: Yes, when I was a kid, I often went to the library. Although I wasn't very interested at first, I enjoyed reading cartoon books there. I especially liked books related to fictional cartoons I saw on TV, such as Harry Potter.

제안: Avoid giving uncertain or irrelevant information. If you don't know, it's better to say so clearly. Also, use correct grammar and avoid repetitive phrases. Try to give a brief, clear opinion if possible.

예시: I am not sure about Chinese kids' habits since I am from India. However, I believe many children in China visit libraries because they value education and learning.

× Yes, I often visit library because of my interest that I have in reading fictional and more scientific books.

✓ Yes, I often visit the library because of my interest that I have in reading fictional and more scientific books.

In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library' in this context, the definite article 'the' is required before the noun. Omitting 'the' makes the sentence sound unnatural and grammatically incorrect.

× When I was a child I used to go to small libraries where I can read cartoon books.

✓ When I was a child, I used to go to small libraries where I could read cartoon books.

The sentence is mostly correct, but 'can' should be changed to 'could' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, a comma after 'child' improves readability.

× But now I have started to read each and every book which is practical knowledge and can be used in real life basis.

✓ But now I have started to read each and every book which contains practical knowledge and can be used in real life situations.

The phrase 'in real life basis' is incorrect. It should be 'in real life situations' or 'in real life contexts'. Also, adding 'contains' clarifies the meaning. The definite article is not directly the issue here but the phrase is incorrect.

× I usually do a lot of things in library.

✓ I usually do a lot of things in the library.

The definite article 'the' is necessary before 'library' when referring to a specific place the speaker usually visits.

× As such, the main purpose of going to library for me is just to complete my work.

✓ As such, the main purpose of going to the library for me is just to complete my work.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' when referring to a specific place.

× However, I don't have so much work nowadays, so I generally go there to read fictional as well as scientific books.

✓ However, I don't have much work nowadays, so I generally go there to read fictional as well as scientific books.

The phrase 'so much work' is less appropriate here; 'much work' is better for uncountable nouns in negative sentences.

× Therefore, I never said at home I always visited library to gain knowledge and experience.

✓ Therefore, I never stayed at home; I always visited the library to gain knowledge and experience.

The verb 'said' is incorrect here; it should be 'stayed'. Also, 'the' is needed before 'library'. The sentence structure is improved by adding a semicolon.

× Yeah, when I was a kid, I usually go to library as it.

✓ Yeah, when I was a kid, I usually went to the library as well.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'the' is needed before 'library'. The phrase 'as it' is unclear and replaced with 'as well' for clarity.

× I was not having an interest in going library when I was small.

✓ I did not have an interest in going to the library when I was small.

The phrase 'was not having' is incorrect; simple past 'did not have' is appropriate. Also, 'going library' should be 'going to the library' with the preposition and definite article.

× But yes, I used to go to it because I have a very huge interest in reading cartoon books.

✓ But yes, I used to go to it because I had a very huge interest in reading cartoon books.

The verb tense should be past 'had' to maintain consistency. The sentence is otherwise correct.

× So I always go there and read cartoon books related to all those fictional cartoons that came on TVI read Harry Potter 2.

✓ So I always went there and read cartoon books related to all those fictional cartoons that came on TV. I read Harry Potter 2.

The verb tense should be past 'went' and 'read' to maintain consistency with past events. Also, the sentence is split for clarity.

× I don't know anything about Chinese kids as I am a Indian so I did not have any opinion or as such things that I know about Chinese kids.

✓ I don't know anything about Chinese kids as I am an Indian, so I do not have any opinion or knowledge about Chinese kids.

The article before 'Indian' should be 'an'. The phrase 'did not have' is changed to 'do not have' to match the present tense 'I don't know'. 'Or as such things that I know' is awkward and replaced with 'or knowledge' for clarity.

× But yes, I think Chinese kids often goes to library because they are also very talented and very smart.

✓ But yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because they are also very talented and very smart.

The verb 'goes' should be 'go' to agree with the plural subject 'Chinese kids'. Also, 'the' is needed before 'library'.

× So I think yes they too have gone to library when they were a child.

✓ So I think yes, they too went to the library when they were children.

The phrase 'have gone' is present perfect, but 'when they were a child' requires simple past 'went'. Also, 'child' should be plural 'children' to agree with 'they'. 'The' is needed before 'library'.