Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp như 'it's give me' nên sửa thành 'it gives me'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn để tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: No, I don't go to the library often. I prefer studying at home because I can concentrate better and feel more comfortable there.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'trustfully', 'discuss discuss decision'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và nói rõ hơn về hoạt động cụ thể bạn làm trong thư viện.

예시: I usually go to the library on weekends with my close friend. We work on group projects and discuss important information related to our studies.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'car a kid', 'I off I prefer spend'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và tránh lặp lại ý giống câu trước.

예시: When I was a child, I rarely went to the library. I usually studied at home because it was quieter and helped me focus better.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lặp từ, câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, có cấu trúc và cung cấp lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

예시: I think it depends. Many Chinese kids go to the library to read newspapers and magazines because there are many libraries with good facilities in China.

× it's give me more energy

✓ it gives me more energy

The verb 'give' should be in the third person singular present tense 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× trustfully I often library especially at the weekend with my close friend

✓ truthfully, I often go to the library especially at the weekend with my close friend

The sentence is missing the verb 'go' after 'often' and 'library' should be preceded by a verb. Also, 'trustfully' is incorrect; the correct word is 'truthfully'.

× we usually join projects and discuss discuss decision or information about our protest

✓ we usually join projects and discuss decisions or information about our project

The word 'discuss' is repeated unnecessarily. 'Decision' should be plural 'decisions' to match the context. 'Protest' seems to be a typo and should be 'project'.

× when I was a car a kid I didn't tend to go to the library

✓ when I was a kid I didn't tend to go to the library

The phrase 'a car a kid' is incorrect and likely a typo. It should be 'a kid'. The rest of the sentence is in past tense and correct.

× so I off I prefer spend my small time studying at home

✓ so I often prefer to spend my small amount of time studying at home

The phrase 'I off I prefer spend' is incorrect. It should be 'I often prefer to spend'. Also, 'small time' is better expressed as 'small amount of time'.

× I think it's a good place where I can fully concentrate and more energy

✓ I think it's a good place where I can fully concentrate and get more energy

The phrase 'and more energy' is incomplete. It needs a verb such as 'get' to complete the meaning.

× Well, to be honest, I, I think depend on, I think depend on because, well, I, you know, to read newspaper or magazines

✓ Well, to be honest, I think it depends because, well, you know, people read newspapers or magazines

The sentence is fragmented and repetitive. 'I think depend on' is incorrect; it should be 'I think it depends'. Also, 'newspaper' should be plural 'newspapers' to match 'magazines'.

× So China has more infrastructure and kids often

✓ So China has more infrastructure, and kids often go to the library

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb after 'kids often'. Adding 'go to the library' completes the thought.