Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and avoid vague phrases like "I guess". Also, avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. For example, say "Yes, I often go to the library to read books and spend time studying."

예시: Yes, I often go to the library to read books and spend time studying because it is a quiet place that helps me focus.

제안: Your answer lacks coherence and contains grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating phrases. For example, say "I usually read books and do research on various topics that interest me."

예시: I usually read books and do research on various topics that interest me, such as history and science.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example, "Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because it provided a quiet and useful environment that helped me focus on my studies."

예시: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid because it was a quiet place that helped me concentrate and feel motivated to study.

제안: Your answer is off-topic and contains unclear phrases. Try to answer the question directly and use correct vocabulary. For example, "I am from India, so I don't know much about Chinese kids, but here I see that they often go to the library to study and do research on topics they are interested in."

예시: I am from India, so I don't know much about Chinese kids, but here I see that they often go to the library to study and do research on topics they are interested in.

× I guess I often go to the library to read books and some spend time.

✓ I guess I often go to the library to read books and spend some time.

The phrase 'some spend time' is incorrect because 'some' is a quantifier that needs to modify a noun or be part of a phrase. Here, 'spend time' is the correct verb phrase. The original sentence incorrectly separates 'some' and 'spend time', causing confusion. The correction removes 'some' before 'spend time' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× So I usually do reading books and doing research on the different things I like to. Read different things.

✓ So I usually read books and do research on different things I like to read.

The verb 'do' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. 'Do reading' and 'doing research' are incorrect; the correct forms are 'read books' and 'do research'. Also, the sentence was fragmented; combining the ideas into one coherent sentence improves clarity.

× Yes, from the starting, like when I, when I'm a kid, I go to the libraries.

✓ Yes, from the beginning, when I was a kid, I went to the libraries.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I'm' and 'go' with a past time reference 'when I was a kid'. The correct past tense forms 'was' and 'went' should be used to maintain tense consistency.

× That's why I want us to go there in this time too.

✓ That's why I want us to go there this time too.

The phrase 'in this time' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'this time' without the preposition 'in'. This is a preposition usage error.

× Because over there I feel like the moment is really great and I got like useful environment that's I need to boost my energy towards my study.

✓ Because over there I feel like the moment is really great and I have a useful environment that I need to boost my energy for my studies.

The phrase 'I got like useful environment that's I need' is grammatically incorrect. 'Got' should be 'have' for present possession. 'That's I need' should be 'that I need'. Also, 'towards my study' is better expressed as 'for my studies'. These corrections fix verb usage, relative pronoun use, and preposition choice.

× Actually I am from India back home, so I never met with the Chinese people there.

✓ Actually, I am from India back home, so I have never met Chinese people there.

The phrase 'never met with' is incorrect; 'meet' is a transitive verb and does not require 'with' in this context. Also, 'never met' should be in present perfect tense 'have never met' to indicate experience up to now.

× But here I see Chinese people and go together and they are doing the same things like being sturdy, research and listening things in which they have interest.

✓ But here I see Chinese people going together and they are doing the same things like studying, researching, and listening to things in which they are interested.

The phrase 'being sturdy' is incorrect; the intended word is 'studying'. 'Research' should be 'researching' to match the verb form. 'Listening things' should be 'listening to things'. Also, 'have interest' should be 'are interested'. These corrections fix vocabulary, verb forms, preposition use, and adjective use.