Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Javobingiz tabiiy va mazmunli, lekin ba'zi gaplar takrorlanmoqda va grammatik jihatdan yaxshilanishi mumkin. Masalan, 'everyone who surrounds me' o'rniga 'everyone around me' deyish tabiiyroq. Shuningdek, 'I have all necessary' jumlasi to'liq emas, 'I have all the necessary resources' deb to'ldirish kerak.

예시: Yes, I go to the children's library every day. It's a new library in Tashkent, and I really like it because I can focus on my studies there. Everyone around me is also studying hard, which motivates me. Moreover, the library provides all the necessary resources I need.

제안: Javobingizda ma'lumotlar takrorlanmoqda va grammatik xatolar bor. Masalan, 'do their my homework' noto'g'ri. Gaplarni qisqartirish va aniqroq ifodalash kerak. Shuningdek, bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalanish javobni yaxshilaydi.

예시: Nowadays, I mostly use the computer class at the library because my laptop is not working. Therefore, I go there to do my homework on the computers. Besides that, I also enjoy reading books in the library.

제안: Javobingizda takroriy so'zlar ko'p va gaplar biroz chalkash. Javobni qisqa va aniq qilib, bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning. Masalan, 'I mostly preferred playing outdoors with my friends instead of going to the library' kabi.

예시: I don't think I went to the library when I was a kid because I can't remember it. Instead, I mostly preferred playing outdoors with my friends after school.

제안: Javobingizda grammatik xatolar va takroriy so'zlar bor. 'I can suppose' ikki marta ishlatilgan. Gapni aniq va tabiiy qilib ifodalash uchun, bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning va grammatikani yaxshilang.

예시: I'm not sure because I don't know much about Chinese culture, but I suppose that Chinese kids often go to the library because their country values discipline and education highly.

× I can focus on my study and everyone who surrounds me.

✓ I can focus on my studies and everyone who surrounds me.

The word 'study' should be plural 'studies' because it refers to the general activity of studying, which is countable in this context.

× I have all necessary.

✓ I have all the necessary things.

The phrase 'all necessary' is incomplete and lacks a noun. Adding 'the necessary things' clarifies the meaning and corrects the pronoun usage.

× I mostly go to the library to use the laptop to use the computer and do their my homework and also I like to read.

✓ I mostly go to the library to use the computer and do my homework, and also I like to read.

The phrase 'their my homework' is incorrect. 'My homework' is the correct possessive pronoun. Also, 'use the laptop to use the computer' is redundant; 'use the computer' suffices.

× I can't remember that I was going to the library when I was a kid.

✓ I can't remember going to the library when I was a kid.

The phrase 'I was going' is awkward here. Using the gerund 'going' after 'remember' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× I mostly go to school.

✓ I mostly went to school.

Since the sentence refers to the past ('when I was a kid'), the verb should be in the past tense 'went' instead of present tense 'go'.

× I mostly prefer to play outdoors with my friends.

✓ I mostly preferred to play outdoors with my friends.

Again, referring to past habits requires past tense 'preferred' instead of present tense 'prefer'.

× I don't know the culture of this of Chinese kids, but I can suppose, I suppose that yes, because Chinese, one of the countries that likes disciplines, you know.

✓ I don't know the culture of Chinese kids, but I suppose that yes, because China is one of the countries that likes discipline, you know.

The phrase 'culture of this of Chinese kids' is incorrect; 'culture of Chinese kids' is correct. Also, 'Chinese' should be 'China' when referring to the country. 'Likes disciplines' should be 'likes discipline' as 'discipline' is uncountable here.