Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit long and has some grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then adding specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrases like 'adapt to various knowledge' and 'with fully consent'.

예시: Yes, I usually go to the library once a week because it gives me peace of mind. Moreover, I can find books on many subjects that help me prepare for my exams.

제안: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using clearer sentence structures and linking words. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and try to be more specific about what you study. Use phrases like 'mainly interested in' and 'for example' to make your answer coherent.

예시: In the library, I usually study different subjects, especially science. For example, I enjoy reading books about Hinduism and spirituality, which interest me a lot.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct tenses and sentence structures. Also, combine your ideas into fewer sentences using linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

예시: Yes, my parents used to take me to the library once a week when I was a child. There, I studied my school subjects and also enjoyed reading comics like Doraemon, Nobita, and Shin Chan.

제안: Your answer is honest but a bit repetitive and incomplete. Try to give a brief direct answer first, then explain politely why you cannot answer fully. Use linking words to make your response coherent and avoid ending abruptly.

예시: I am not sure about Chinese kids because I have never visited China. Therefore, I don't know much about their study habits or how often they go to the library.

× Yes, of course, I go to library once in a week as it provides me Peace of Mind and I can adapt to various knowledge relating to various subjects from the books which are available in the library.

✓ Yes, of course, I go to the library once a week as it provides me peace of mind and I can gain various knowledge relating to various subjects from the books which are available in the library.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'once in a week' should be 'once a week' for natural expression. 'Peace of Mind' should not be capitalized. 'Adapt to various knowledge' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'gain' or 'acquire' knowledge. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and naturalness.

× Additionally, I can also study regarding my exams in that with fully consent.

✓ Additionally, I can also study for my exams there with full consent.

The preposition 'regarding' is incorrectly used; 'study for my exams' is correct. 'In that' is awkward; 'there' is better to refer to the library. 'Fully consent' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'full consent'. These changes correct preposition and phrase usage.

× I usually study in the library regarding various subjects and the different topics in which I am interested in the science.

✓ I usually study in the library various subjects and different topics in which I am interested, especially science.

The use of 'regarding' is awkward here; it is better to say 'study various subjects and different topics'. Also, 'interested in the science' should be 'interested in science' without 'the'. These corrections improve preposition and article usage.

× So I read the books which are related to Hinduism and science.

✓ So I read books which are related to Hinduism and science.

The definite article 'the' before 'books' is unnecessary here because it refers to books in general, not specific ones. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural.

× Yes, my parents used to take me to library once a week when I was a children.

✓ Yes, my parents used to take me to the library once a week when I was a child.

'To library' needs the definite article 'the'. Also, 'a children' is incorrect; 'children' is plural, so the singular 'child' should be used here. These corrections fix article and singular/plural errors.

× When I was a child and I studied there regarding my topics and different comics.

✓ When I was a child, I studied there about my topics and different comics.

The sentence is a fragment and lacks proper structure. Adding a comma and removing 'and' improves sentence structure. Also, 'regarding' is better replaced with 'about' for naturalness. This fixes sentence structure and preposition usage.

× The comics related to cartoons like Doraemon, Nobita, Shin Chan.

✓ The comics are related to cartoons like Doraemon, Nobita, and Shin Chan.

The sentence lacks a verb; adding 'are' corrects sentence structure. Also, adding 'and' before the last item in the list is standard. This fixes sentence structure errors.

× So it is quite difficult for me to answer this question because I have never visited China as well as I don't know the nature and the way of studying of the students of the China.

✓ So it is quite difficult for me to answer this question because I have never visited China, and I don't know the nature and the way of studying of the students in China.

The phrase 'students of the China' is incorrect; it should be 'students in China'. Also, 'as well as' is better replaced with 'and' for clarity here. These corrections improve preposition and conjunction usage.

× So it's difficult to.

✓ So it's difficult to answer.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'to'. Adding 'answer' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.