Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but a bit short and repetitive. Try to give a clear topic sentence and add specific reasons or examples to make your answer more natural and effective. Avoid repeating the same idea twice.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it is very close to where I live. I enjoy going there to read books and study in a quiet environment.

제안: Your answer is unclear and has some grammar mistakes. Try to organize your ideas logically using linking words and be specific about your activities. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

예시: Usually, I look for different kinds of books to read, such as novels and comedies. I enjoy exploring both new and old books because the library has a wide selection.

제안: Your answer has good content but the grammar and sentence structure need improvement. Use past tense consistently and connect your ideas clearly with linking words. Be more specific about your experiences.

예시: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a child, especially during primary school. My friends and I would go there during free time to find books we liked, such as comic books and cartoons.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and lacks coherence. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library because their families encourage reading. Libraries provide a comfortable environment with air conditioning, which makes it a relaxing place to read.

× I will find different kinds of book to read because there are many types like comedy, like novel that you can choose there.

✓ I will find different kinds of books to read because there are many types like comedy, like novels that you can choose there.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because 'different kinds of' refers to multiple items. Similarly, 'novel' should be plural 'novels' to match the plural context.

× So you can search different types of book there.

✓ So you can search different types of books there.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because 'different types of' indicates multiple items.

× So is you can just go around and then water, is it a new book or the old books that you can find easily there?

✓ So you can just go around and see whether it is a new book or old books that you can find easily there.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Water' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'see whether'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I always went to library when I'm a kid that especially my primary school, that is when we are free that we will go to library with my friends together to search some books that we are interested.

✓ Yes, I always went to the library when I was a kid, especially in primary school. When we were free, we would go to the library with my friends to look for books that interested us.

The sentence has tense inconsistencies and missing articles. 'I'm a kid' should be past tense 'I was a kid'. 'Library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Are free' should be past tense 'were free'. 'Will go' should be past tense 'would go'. The sentence is also split for clarity.

× Like when we are a child, we like to see some comedy like some cartoon.

✓ Like when we were children, we liked to see some comedy like cartoons.

'A child' should be plural 'children' to match 'we'. The verb tense is changed to past 'were' and 'liked' to match the past context. 'Cartoon' should be plural 'cartoons'.

× Yes, Chinese kids always go to the library because there is a park or library.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids always go to the library because there is a park or a library nearby.

The sentence is unclear without specifying location. Adding 'nearby' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'a park or library' should be 'a park or a library' for parallel structure.

× If they really interest on reading books.

✓ If they are really interested in reading books.

The correct phrase is 'interested in', not 'interest on'. Also, 'are' is needed to form the correct verb phrase.

× People like the family members will bring them to the library because they can sit down with some AC air conditioner and then have a very relaxed thing.

✓ People like family members will bring them to the library because they can sit down with air conditioning and have a very relaxing time.

'The family members' should be 'family members' without 'the'. 'AC air conditioner' is redundant; 'air conditioning' is better. 'Have a very relaxed thing' is ungrammatical; 'have a very relaxing time' is correct.