Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata yang membuat jawaban terdengar kurang alami. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan jelas, serta hindari pengulangan kata seperti "like enjoy". Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dengan subjek, predikat, dan objek yang jelas.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it helps me relax and clear my mind after a busy day.

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat kesalahan tata bahasa serta penggunaan kata yang tidak tepat seperti "running library" dan "smell of of". Cobalah untuk menjelaskan kegiatan Anda di perpustakaan dengan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan gunakan kata kerja yang tepat. Selain itu, gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

예시: Usually, I walk around the library to enjoy the smell of old books, and sometimes I sit down and chat with strangers, which helps me feel connected to others.

제안: Jawaban Anda mengandung kesalahan tata bahasa dan pengucapan kata seperti "when I was killed" yang seharusnya "when I was a kid". Selain itu, kalimat Anda kurang terstruktur dan ada penggunaan kata yang kurang tepat. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih jelas dan gunakan detail yang spesifik untuk memperkaya jawaban.

예시: Yes, I loved going to the library near my house called Rambacha when I was a kid. I often read fairy tale books there.

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat kesalahan tata bahasa serta penggunaan kata yang tidak tepat seperti "There are really like a book". Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang lebih terstruktur dan gunakan kosakata yang sesuai. Jelaskan kebiasaan anak-anak Cina dengan kalimat yang lebih alami dan logis.

예시: Yes, Chinese children often go to the library because they have a good habit of reading. They sometimes bring books with them wherever they go.

× Yes of course I really like enjoy my time especially in library because when I in library I can calm down my mind and also unwind from my hectic day.

✓ Yes of course I really enjoy my time especially in the library because when I am in the library I can calm down my mind and also unwind from my hectic day.

The phrase 'like enjoy' is incorrect; 'like' should be followed by a verb in the -ing form or a noun. Here, 'enjoy' is the correct verb to use alone. Also, 'in library' needs the definite article 'the' and the verb 'am' is missing in 'when I in library'. Correcting these improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× Yes of course I really like enjoy my time especially in library because when I in library I can calm down my mind and also unwind from my hectic day.

✓ Yes of course I really enjoy my time especially in the library because when I am in the library I can calm down my mind and also unwind from my hectic day.

The noun 'library' is a specific place here, so it requires the definite article 'the' before it. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× Yes of course I really like enjoy my time especially in library because when I in library I can calm down my mind and also unwind from my hectic day.

✓ Yes of course I really enjoy my time especially in the library because when I am in the library I can calm down my mind and also unwind from my hectic day.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' in the phrase 'when I in library'. The present continuous tense requires the verb 'to be' before the present participle or location.

× I usually just running library to smell of of all of the old books and also sometimes I'm just sitting down and talking with random people.

✓ I usually just run to the library to smell all of the old books and also sometimes I'm just sitting down and talking with random people.

The verb 'running' is incorrectly used after 'usually just'; the base form 'run' is correct here because 'usually' indicates habitual action and requires the base verb form. Also, 'to smell of of all of the old books' is corrected to 'to smell all of the old books' for clarity and correctness.

× I usually just running library to smell of of all of the old books and also sometimes I'm just sitting down and talking with random people.

✓ I usually just run to the library to smell all of the old books and also sometimes I'm just sitting down and talking with random people.

The phrase 'running library' lacks the preposition 'to' before 'library'. The correct preposition to indicate movement towards a place is 'to'.

× It's really make me have a deep connection with others I don't know.

✓ It really makes me have a deep connection with others I don't know.

The subject 'It' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make' to agree in present tense.

× So when I was killed, I'm going to the library near of my house.

✓ So when I was a kid, I used to go to the library near my house.

'Was killed' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'was a kid'. Also, 'I'm going' is present tense and inconsistent with 'when I was a kid'; past tense 'used to go' is appropriate. 'Near of my house' is incorrect preposition usage; 'near my house' is correct.

× So when I was killed, I'm going to the library near of my house.

✓ So when I was a kid, I used to go to the library near my house.

The preposition 'of' after 'near' is incorrect. 'Near' is directly followed by the noun without 'of'.

× The name is Rambacha.

✓ Its name is Rambacha.

When referring to the library, a place, the possessive pronoun 'its' should be used instead of 'the' to indicate ownership or association.

× I read a lot of books like a fairy tale.

✓ I read a lot of books like fairy tales.

'A fairy tale' is singular, but 'books' is plural, so the quantifier and noun should agree in number. 'Fairy tales' plural matches 'books'.

× I read a lot of books like a fairy tale.

✓ I read a lot of books like fairy tales.

The phrase 'like a fairy tale' mismatches singular and plural forms. Since 'books' is plural, 'fairy tales' should also be plural.

× Of course, I think Chinese have a good habit.

✓ Of course, I think Chinese people have a good habit.

'Chinese' here refers to people and should be followed by 'people' to clarify the plural noun. Without 'people', it can be ambiguous.

× There are really like a book.

✓ They really like books.

'There are really like a book' is ungrammatical. The correct subject pronoun is 'They', and 'like books' is the correct plural form to express general liking.

× There are really like a book.

✓ They really like books.

'There are' is incorrect here; the subject should be 'They' to refer to people. Also, 'a book' should be plural 'books' to match the general statement.

× Sometimes they're going to library or bring their book everywhere they want to go.

✓ Sometimes they go to the library or bring their books everywhere they want to go.

'Going to library' needs the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'bring their book' should be plural 'books' to match the plural subject.