Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer deer iluu todorhoi ba helbertei helj, redundant ug helj baigaa hesgiig hasah heregtei. Jishee ni, "Yes, I often went to the library before I graduated. I usually went there four or five times a week to study."

예시: Yes, I often went to the library before I graduated. I usually went there four or five times a week to study.

제안: Helber ni iluu todorhoi, utga ni oilgomjtoi baigaa ch, ug helber ni holimog baigaa. Link ug ashiglan, todorhoi tailbar ogoh heregtei. Jishee ni, "In Mongolia, during 12th grade, which is the senior year, we have a big exam called Yish. I usually prepared for this exam and also for English exams like Niles in the library."

예시: In Mongolia, during 12th grade, which is the senior year, we have a big exam called Yish. I usually prepared for this exam and also for English exams like Niles in the library.

제안: Utga ni oilgomjtoi baigaa ch, helber ni buruu, ug helber ni duuren bish, tailbar duuren ugui baina. Iluu todorhoi, helbertei, link ug ashiglan helj surah heregtei. Jishee ni, "No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I was noisy and could not concentrate in such a quiet place."

예시: No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because I was noisy and could not concentrate in such a quiet place.

제안: Utga ni oilgomjgui, helber buruu, tailbar todorhoi bish, redundant ug ihtei baina. Iluu todorhoi, oilgomjtoi, link ug ashiglan helj surah heregtei. Jishee ni, "As a Mongolian, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because China has a large population and many students study there in the evenings."

예시: As a Mongolian, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because China has a large population and many students study there in the evenings.

× I used to go library for four or five times for a week.

✓ I used to go to the library four or five times a week.

The sentence misses the preposition 'to' before 'library' and incorrectly uses 'for' before 'four or five times'. The correct phrase is 'go to the library' and 'four or five times a week' to indicate frequency.

× I used to go library for four or five times for a week.

✓ I used to go to the library four or five times a week.

The preposition 'to' is necessary after 'go' when referring to a place. Also, 'for' before 'four or five times' is incorrect; frequency expressions use 'times a week' without 'for'.

× We have a really big exam which named Yish and I used to prepare for this and also I used to prepare for the English exams such as Niles.

✓ We have a really big exam called Yish, and I used to prepare for it. I also used to prepare for English exams such as Niles.

The phrase 'which named Yish' is incorrect; it should be 'called Yish'. Also, the sentence is long and needs to be split for clarity. 'Prepare for this' is vague; 'prepare for it' is clearer.

× I used to go library for four or five times for a week.

✓ I used to go to the library four or five times a week.

The preposition 'to' is missing after 'go'. Also, 'for' before 'four or five times' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'four or five times a week'.

× Like I can't focus in library because it's too quiet.

✓ I can't focus in the library because it's too quiet.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. Without 'the', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× I do something like in focused, I do it in.

✓ I do something like that when I'm focused; I do it there.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. It needs restructuring to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× For respect from Mongolia Mongolian kid I would say yes because Chinese China has a really big population so kids should have to like go to the library of night.

✓ Compared to Mongolian kids, I would say yes because China has a really big population, so kids have to go to the library at night.

The sentence has pronoun and article misuse. 'For respect from Mongolia Mongolian kid' is unclear and should be 'Compared to Mongolian kids'. 'Should have to like go' is incorrect; 'have to go' is correct. 'Of night' should be 'at night'.

× kids should have to like go to the library of night.

✓ kids have to go to the library at night.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect here; the correct preposition for time is 'at'. Also, 'should have to like go' is redundant and incorrect; 'have to go' suffices.