Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且用更准确的词汇表达你的意思。可以先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体说明原因。

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading. I like to explore different types of books, especially those with interesting storylines.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整的句子，明确表达你在图书馆的活动，并且避免重复和不完整的句子。

예시: Usually, I read books in the library. Sometimes, I also use the computers there because I don't have a computer at home.

제안: 回答中时态使用不当，句子结构混乱，表达不完整。建议使用过去时态，简洁明了地描述童年时去图书馆的经历，并提供具体细节。

예시: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a child because there were not many entertainment options. I enjoyed reading books and sometimes used the computers there.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并用恰当的连接词使句子连贯。

예시: Yes, I think many Chinese children often go to the library because their parents encourage them to study there. In contrast, American parents may be more flexible with their children's activities.

× Yes, I am a person who like to go to the library because I'm a person who like reading.

✓ Yes, I am a person who likes to go to the library because I'm a person who likes reading.

主语是单数（a person），谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式，like应改为likes。

× I I want to visit any areas the books, the type different kind of the books such as like the storyline.

✓ I want to visit any areas of the books, the different kinds of books such as the storyline.

books是复数，kind前应使用复数形式kinds，areas后应加介词of表示所属关系。

× I would say I usually reading the books in the library and also sometimes I will use the computer in the library.

✓ I would say I usually read books in the library and also sometimes I use the computer in the library.

通常情态动词would后接动词原形，通常习惯动作用一般现在时，reading应改为read。

× This is because I didn't have the full computer in my home so I used to be. I used to use.

✓ This is because I didn't have a full computer at home, so I used to use one.

句子不完整，used to后应接动词原形，且表达完整意思。

× Yes, I usually go to the library when I was a child because there is not a lot of entertainment things in my childhood.

✓ Yes, I usually went to the library when I was a child because there were not a lot of entertainment options in my childhood.

描述过去习惯动作应使用过去时，go改为went，there is改为there were，entertainment things表达不自然，改为entertainment options。

× So I usually go to the library find some fun.

✓ So I usually went to the library to find some fun.

过去习惯动作用过去时，go改为went，动词不定式to find补充目的。

× So in that time my interests were like watching books.

✓ So at that time my interests were like reading books.

表达兴趣时用reading books更自然，watching books不合适。

× Also I want to use those COM computers to do some like.

✓ Also I wanted to use those computers to do some work.

过去时态want改为wanted，COM computers表达不清，去掉COM，句子补充完整。

× I think most of the most parents to to to order their kids to go to the library doing some study things.

✓ I think most parents order their kids to go to the library to do some study activities.

去掉多余的most，order后接宾语，go to the library后用不定式to do表示目的，study things表达不自然，改为study activities。

× So compared to America, their parents will more encourage them to do anything.

✓ So compared to America, their parents encourage them more to do anything.

more应放在encourage后修饰动词，will去掉更符合习惯表达。