Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“the book what I need”应为“the books that I need”，“library is always suit to study in it”应为“the library is always suitable for studying”。建议注意句子结构和词汇搭配，使表达更地道。

예시: Yes, I often go to the library to find the books that I need. I think the library is always a suitable place to study because it has a nice environment.

제안: 回答中表达不清晰且有重复，如“read some books, read some books”。“study my housework”表达不准确，应为“do my homework”。建议简洁明了地表达，并避免重复。

예시: I usually do my homework in the library and read books that I don't have at home.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，如“you always be keep quiet”应为“you always have to keep quiet”，“I was want to talk a lot about others”表达不准确。建议加强语法基础，使用正确时态和表达方式。

예시: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because you have to be very quiet there, and I liked to talk a lot, so my parents didn't take me.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达问题，如“more Chinese kids go to the library”应为“many Chinese kids go to the library”，“how to speaking about books”应为“how to talk about books”。建议注意动词形式和句子结构。

예시: Yes, many Chinese kids go to the library because some libraries offer lessons that teach them how to read books and how to talk about them.

× I often go to the library to find the book what I need and I think library is always suit to study in it because it have a nice observation for.

✓ I often go to the library to find the book that I need and I think the library is always suitable to study in because it has a nice environment.

句中使用了错误的关系代词“what”，应使用“that”或“which”来引导定语从句。此外，“library”前缺少定冠词“the”，动词“have”应与单数主语“library”一致用“has”，形容词“suit”应为“suitable”，并且“observation”用词不当，应改为“environment”表示环境。

× I often go to the library to find the book what I need and I think library is always suit to study in it because it have a nice observation for.

✓ I often go to the library to find the book that I need and I think the library is always suitable to study in because it has a nice environment.

主语“library”是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式“has”，而不是“have”。

× I often go to the library to find the book what I need and I think library is always suit to study in it because it have a nice observation for.

✓ I often go to the library to find the book that I need and I think the library is always suitable to study in because it has a nice environment.

“library”前应加定冠词“the”，因为这里指特定的图书馆。

× I often go to the library to find the book what I need and I think library is always suit to study in it because it have a nice observation for.

✓ I often go to the library to find the book that I need and I think the library is always suitable to study in because it has a nice environment.

短语“suit to study in it”中“suit”用法错误，应为“suitable to study in”，且“in it”多余。

× I usually study my housework in the library and I always read some books, read some books which I have not in my home.

✓ I usually do my homework in the library and I always read some books that I don't have at home.

“study my housework”表达不当，应为“do my homework”；“which I have not in my home”结构错误，应为“that I don't have at home”。

× I usually study my housework in the library and I always read some books, read some books which I have not in my home.

✓ I usually do my homework in the library and I always read some books that I don't have at home.

“in my home”应改为“at home”，表示在家。

× No, because you know in the library you always be keep quiet.

✓ No, because you know in the library you always have to keep quiet.

“you always be keep quiet”结构错误，应使用情态动词“have to”表示必须保持安静。

× So when I was a kid I was want to talk a lot about others so my parents don't take me to the library.

✓ So when I was a kid I wanted to talk a lot with others, so my parents didn't take me to the library.

“was want”错误，应为过去式“wanted”；“don't take”应为过去式“didn't take”；“talk a lot about others”表达不当，应为“talk a lot with others”。

× So when I was a kid I was want to talk a lot about others so my parents don't take me to the library.

✓ So when I was a kid I wanted to talk a lot with others, so my parents didn't take me to the library.

“talk about others”意思不明确，应改为“talk with others”，表示与别人交谈。

× Yes, more Chinese kids go to the library because some libraries also have some lessons to the kids that they teach them how to read the books and how to speaking about books.

✓ Yes, more Chinese kids go to the library because some libraries also have lessons for kids that teach them how to read books and how to speak about books.

“lessons to the kids”应为“lessons for kids”；“how to speaking”应为“how to speak”；“the books”前的定冠词不必要，应去掉。