Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, avoiding unnecessary words like 'My cakes'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you go to the library, using linking words such as 'because' or 'when'.

예시: I don't go to the library very often because I usually read books online. However, I visit the library when I need to borrow physical books or print important documents.

제안: Your answer repeats information and lacks variety. Try to avoid redundancy by not repeating phrases like 'as I answered in the previous question'. Instead, provide a clear topic sentence and add specific details using linking words such as 'mainly' or 'usually'.

예시: I usually go to the library to borrow books and print documents. Sometimes, I also study there because it is a quiet place.

제안: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases, such as 'when I was gay' and 'when I was good'. Make sure to use correct words and sentence structures. Also, answer directly with a topic sentence and support it with reasons or examples. Avoid unnecessary repetition.

예시: I don't remember going to the library when I was a kid because I rarely visited one. Instead, I preferred reading books at home.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and avoiding repetitive phrases like 'so that's why' and 'so they go'. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'therefore' to make your answer more coherent and concise.

예시: Yes, Chinese children often go to the library because they take their studies seriously. They need resources for school projects, so the library provides valuable support.

× My cakes I don't go to the library very often.

✓ I don't go to the library very often.

The phrase 'My cakes' is incorrect and irrelevant in this context. It should be removed to make the sentence grammatically correct and meaningful.

× I only go to library when I read any books from the library and I need some printouts at that time I go to the library.

✓ I only go to the library when I read books from the library and need some printouts; at that time, I go to the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'any books' is better as 'books' in this context. The sentence is improved by adding punctuation for clarity.

× As I answered in the previous question as well that I go to library to borrow any book and print out some documents and in these cases I go to the library.

✓ As I answered in the previous question, I go to the library to borrow books and print out some documents; in these cases, I go to the library.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, 'any book' is better as 'books' for general statements. Adding commas improves sentence clarity.

× I don't remember exactly when I was gay because at that time I don't have a that kind of memory to still remember those kind of things.

✓ I don't remember exactly when I was a kid because at that time I didn't have that kind of memory to remember those things.

The word 'gay' is likely a typo for 'kid'. Also, the past tense 'didn't have' should be used instead of 'don't have' when referring to past time. The phrase 'still remember' is redundant here.

× But I don't think so that I have gone to the library when I was good.

✓ But I don't think that I went to the library when I was a kid.

The phrase 'have gone' is present perfect and does not fit with the past time 'when I was a kid'. The correct past tense 'went' should be used. Also, 'was good' is incorrect; it should be 'was a kid'.

× Yes, I think that Chinese children mostly go to the library because they are kind of serious in their studies and they have some school projects to do, so that's why they need some help, so they go to the library.

✓ Yes, I think that Chinese children mostly go to the library because they are serious about their studies and have some school projects to do; that's why they need some help and go to the library.

The phrase 'kind of serious' is informal and can be improved to 'serious about'. The sentence is long and can be split for clarity. The plural 'children' is correctly used here.