Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can concentrate. I also enjoy reading books there to learn new things and complete my projects efficiently.

제안: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words properly and avoid repeating the same idea. Provide specific activities you do and explain why you do them in the library.

예시: In the library, I usually read books and work on my projects with my friends. Because it is a quiet environment, I can concentrate better and complete my assignments effectively.

제안: Use past tense consistently when talking about the past. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'or whatever'.

예시: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a kid because I wanted to get more information. Also, I liked the quiet atmosphere which helped me concentrate on my homework and projects with my friends.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks specific details. Try to give a direct answer with reasons or examples. Avoid vague expressions like 'I don't know' and incomplete sentences.

예시: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library because it helps them study and improve their knowledge. Libraries are popular places for students to prepare for exams and complete their homework.

× In my opinion that from reading books I learn new things and more information and it's a quiet place that I can finish my projects and my practicals.

✓ In my opinion, by reading books I learn new things and more information, and it's a quiet place where I can finish my projects and my practicals.

The phrase 'from reading books' should be 'by reading books' to correctly express the means of learning. Also, 'that' should be 'where' to refer to the place. Using 'by' before a verb in -ing form indicates the method or way something is done.

× I do many things there. For example, I read books and I finish my projects with my friends and finish my assignments because it's a quiet environment, so it's so I can concentrate.

✓ I do many things there. For example, I read books, finish my projects with my friends, and complete my assignments because it's a quiet environment, so I can concentrate.

The sentence has redundant conjunctions and awkward phrasing. 'And' is overused and 'so it's so I can concentrate' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses commas to list activities and simplifies the conjunctions for clarity.

× Yes I do. When I was a kid I like to go to the library so that I can get more information and get to finish my project and assignments with my friends.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a kid, I liked to go to the library so that I could get more information and finish my projects and assignments with my friends.

The question is about past habits, so the answer should be in the past tense. 'I do' should be 'I did', 'I like' should be 'I liked', and 'can' should be 'could' to match past tense context.

× And I like a quiet place so I can concentrate with my works and homework or whatever.

✓ And I like a quiet place so I can concentrate on my work and homework or whatever.

'Works' is incorrect here; the correct uncountable noun is 'work'. Also, the preposition 'with' should be 'on' when talking about concentrating on tasks.

× Yes, I think that they go to the library because there are famous of like they're smart and I don't know.

✓ Yes, I think that they go to the library because they are famous for being smart, but I'm not sure.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'There are famous of like they're smart' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.