Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'or, or or' and make your answer more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library when I am at university. Usually, I visit during breaks to finish my homework or prepare for exams. It is a quiet place that helps me focus better.

제안: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use clear linking words to explain reasons and keep your answer structured and natural.

예시: I usually find a quiet spot in the library to finish my homework and study. This is because I find it difficult to concentrate when I am at home.

제안: Try to use more formal vocabulary and avoid contractions like 'wanna'. Also, connect your ideas with linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: No, I did not go to the library as a child because my parents were not fond of reading or spending time there. However, I always wanted to visit, and now I am happy that I can go and complete my work.

제안: Avoid unclear phrases like 'not very kind on reading' and grammatical errors. Use precise vocabulary and linking words to express your opinion clearly and logically.

예시: I am not certain about all Chinese children, but I believe many do not visit libraries frequently because they may not enjoy reading. Additionally, most schools have small libraries, so students might not feel the need to go elsewhere.

× I usually go there when I have a break and I finish my homework or, or or I study to my exams or just study.

✓ I usually go there when I have a break and I finish my homework or I study for my exams or just study.

The phrase 'study to my exams' is incorrect because the verb 'study' should be followed by the preposition 'for' when referring to preparing for exams. Using 'to' here is a preposition error, so it should be corrected to 'study for my exams'.

× I usually go to sit into the into the quiet places and I try to finish my homework and study as much as I can, 'cause when? Because when I go at home I cannot do that and.

✓ I usually go to sit in the quiet places and I try to finish my homework and study as much as I can, because when I go home I cannot do that.

The preposition 'into' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to sitting inside a place. Also, 'go at home' is incorrect; it should be 'go home' without a preposition. The sentence was also fragmented and needed to be completed properly for clarity.

× No, both of my parents are not people who love reading books or to sit there, so I have never been there, but I always wanna go there.

✓ No, both of my parents are not people who love reading books or sitting there, so I have never been there, but I always want to go there.

The phrase 'or to sit there' is incorrect because after 'love' the verb should be in the gerund form 'sitting' rather than the infinitive 'to sit'. Also, 'wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in formal speech.

× Also, most school have a small library where students can read, so they probably don't need don't feel the need.

✓ Also, most schools have a small library where students can read, so they probably don't feel the need.

The noun 'school' should be plural 'schools' to agree with 'most'. Also, the phrase 'don't need don't feel the need' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'don't feel the need'.