Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid phrases like "If I tell the truth" which sound unnatural. Also, use correct time expressions such as "for a year" instead of "since one year". Try to directly answer the question first, then add supporting details.

예시: I don't go to the library often now because I started university a year ago. However, when I was at school, I used to visit the library frequently to study and borrow books.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more natural. Avoid awkward phrases like "as far as possible in a silent mode". Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, and be specific about what you do and why.

예시: When I go to the library, I usually read several books quietly because I can concentrate better there than at home or in a café.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and somewhat repetitive. Avoid unnecessary phrases like "if I tell the truth". Provide a clear and complete response with reasons or explanations to support your answer.

예시: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because I wasn't familiar with it and didn't know what it was for.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and precise. Use correct expressions like "in my opinion" instead of "from my perspectives". Avoid repeating the same idea and provide specific reasons or examples.

예시: In my opinion, many Chinese children often visit the library because their parents encourage them to study and improve their knowledge for a better future.

× I have not gone to the library since one year as I have already entered the university.

✓ I have not gone to the library for one year since I entered the university.

The phrase 'since one year' is incorrect; 'for one year' is used to indicate duration. Also, 'as I have already entered the university' is better expressed as 'since I entered the university' to indicate the starting point of the action in the past.

× Well, mostly when I go to the library I read many books as far as possible in a silent mode, because in the library I concentrate well then the other places like at home or the cafe.

✓ Well, mostly when I go to the library, I read as many books as possible in silence, because in the library I concentrate better than in other places like at home or the cafe.

The phrase 'as far as possible' is incorrect here; the correct expression is 'as many books as possible' to indicate quantity. 'In a silent mode' should be 'in silence'. Also, 'concentrate well then the other places' should be 'concentrate better than in other places' to correctly compare concentration levels.

× The main reason why I didn't go to the library is that.

✓ The main reason why I didn't go to the library is that I didn't know what kind of place it was.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main clause after 'is that'. Adding the reason completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× From my perspectives, yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents teach to learn and how to be clever person in the future.

✓ From my perspective, yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents teach them to learn and how to be clever people in the future.

The phrase 'From my perspectives' should be singular 'From my perspective'. Also, 'teach to learn' is incomplete; it should be 'teach them to learn'. 'Clever person' should be plural 'clever people' to agree with 'Chinese kids'.