Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免重复表达，如“library can provide me a good study atmosphere which can make me concentrate on my study better”中“good study atmosphere”和“concentrate on my study better”意思重复。建议简洁表达，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I usually go to the library only when preparing for exams because it offers a quiet environment that helps me focus better.

제안: 回答不够清晰，尤其是“give myself some extra permissions to improve my study”表达不自然且含义模糊。建议用更具体和自然的表达说明在图书馆的活动，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

예시: I usually complete my school assignments in the library, and after finishing them, I spend some extra time reading books to deepen my understanding.

제안: 回答较好，但“scientific fiction books”应为“science fiction books”，且“like 8 years old”表达不够正式。建议使用更准确的词汇和表达方式。

예시: Yes, I visited the library every day when I was eight years old in primary school. I was a big fan of reading, especially science fiction and romance novels.

제안: 回答中“force their children”用词过于强烈，且“school works”应为“schoolwork”。建议使用更自然的表达，并补充具体细节使内容更丰富。

예시: Yes, many Chinese children often go to the library because their parents encourage them to study there and complete their schoolwork in a quiet environment.

× Well, I only go to the library when I need to prepare for my school exam because library can provide me a good study atmosphere which can make me concentrate on my study better.

✓ Well, I only go to the library when I need to prepare for my school exam because the library can provide me a good study atmosphere which can make me concentrate on my study better.

在英语中，单数可数名词前通常需要加冠词。这里的“library”是单数可数名词，前面缺少定冠词“the”，表示特指某个图书馆。

× I usually complete my school assignments in the library. When I finish it, I usually give myself some extra permissions to improve my study.

✓ I usually complete my school assignments in the library. When I finish them, I usually give myself some extra permissions to improve my study.

“assignments”是复数，代词应使用复数形式“them”而非单数“it”。

× When I finish it, I usually give myself some extra permissions to improve my study.

✓ When I finish it, I usually give myself some extra permission to improve my study.

“permission”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“permissions”，应使用单数形式。

× I'm a big fan of reading, especially for the scientific fiction books and some romantic books.

✓ I'm a big fan of reading, especially scientific fiction books and some romantic books.

“fan of”后面直接接名词，不需要介词“for”。

× so many parents will force their children to go to a library to complete their school works or prepare for their exams.

✓ so many parents will force their children to go to the library to complete their school work or prepare for their exams.

“library”前应使用定冠词“the”表示特指。 “school work”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“works”。