Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors.

예시: I don't often go to the library nowadays because technology allows me to access information online easily. However, in the past, visiting the library was more common in my area.

제안: Make your answer clearer and more structured. Use correct verb tenses and linking words to connect ideas. Provide specific examples of activities you did in the library.

예시: During my college days, I usually went to the library to research information related to my subjects. Recently, I have also visited the library to study for important exams.

제안: Try to complete your sentences and provide more specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague statements. Make sure your answer is grammatically correct and coherent.

예시: Yes, when I was a kid, it was required for us to visit the library during elementary school. We studied various kinds of books there, which helped me learn a lot of new information.

제안: Provide a more confident and structured answer. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly and avoid repetition. Try to give a balanced view with specific reasons.

예시: I'm not certain, but I think Chinese kids don't visit libraries as often nowadays because technology makes it easy to access information online. However, libraries still play an important role in some schools and communities.

× I don't go to library and it is not very popular here in our location, but in the past we were.

✓ I don't go to the library and it is not very popular here in our location, but in the past we were.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library', the definite article 'the' is required. This is a common article usage error.

× Well, back in I in my college days, I go to the library to browse different information regarding our subject.

✓ Well, back in my college days, I went to the library to browse different information regarding our subject.

The sentence is talking about past events, so the verb 'go' should be in the past tense 'went'. Also, the phrase 'back in I in my college days' is incorrect; it should be 'back in my college days'. This corrects the tense and sentence structure.

× I can remember that also I go to the library in the recent years just to study some necessary.

✓ I can remember that I also went to the library in recent years just to study some necessary things.

Since the action happened in the past, 'go' should be changed to 'went'. Also, 'some necessary' is incomplete; it should be 'some necessary things' or similar. The word order is adjusted for clarity.

× Well, as far as I remember, it is a requirement for us in my elementary days to go to the library to study there.

✓ Well, as far as I remember, it was a requirement for us in my elementary days to go to the library to study there.

The sentence refers to a past requirement, so the verb 'is' should be in the past tense 'was' to match the time frame.

× In addition to this, we study different kind of books and I think that there is some information that.

✓ In addition to this, we studied different kinds of books and I think that there is some information that.

'Different kind of books' should be 'different kinds of books' to agree in number. Also, since the context is past, 'study' should be 'studied'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected as much as possible.

× Maybe nowadays even in China it is not popular to go to the library because technology is very common.

✓ Maybe nowadays even in China it is not popular to go to the library because technology is very common.

This sentence is grammatically correct in present tense and needs no correction.

× We can just browse different information using the technology and using different application network.

✓ We can just browse different information using technology and different application networks.

The article 'the' before 'technology' is unnecessary here. Also, 'application network' should be plural 'application networks' to match the context. Prepositions and articles are corrected for natural usage.