Library— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you often go to the library?
수험생
Unfortunately, I do not get the opportunity to visit the library pretty often. There really aren't many libraries around where I live and that fact disappoints me a lot.
시험관
What do you usually do in the library?
수험생
In the past, when I had the opportunity to visit libraries, I would go there and pick out the books that I'd like to read. More often than not, the books I'd pick were in the science fiction genre, but a lot of the times I would pick up fiction books that were appealing based on the summary given on their backs.
시험관
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
수험생
A lot of the times, actually, there was a library at school and during lunch I would sneak my way into the library to pick up my favorite books. The library at school had a lot of toys as well, which I was attracted to when I was a kid.
시험관
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
수험생
As someone from as someone who's from Bangladesh, I actually cannot answer this question because I do not know what the Chinese kids visit the library or not.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
점수: 75.0제안: Your answer is clear and relevant but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and natural by combining ideas and avoiding redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.
예시: I don't visit the library often because there aren't many near my home, which is quite disappointing.
What do you usually do in the library?
점수: 80.0제안: Your answer is detailed and relevant, but it can be improved by using linking words to make it more coherent and by avoiding repetitive phrases like 'a lot of the times'. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary.
예시: When I visited libraries, I usually chose science fiction books; however, sometimes I picked other fiction titles that seemed interesting based on their summaries.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
점수: 78.0제안: Your answer is good but can be more natural by avoiding phrases like 'a lot of the times' and by structuring sentences more clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas and be concise.
예시: Yes, I often visited the school library during lunch to read my favorite books, and I was also attracted to the toys they had there.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
점수: 70.0제안: It's good to be honest, but try to answer the question more naturally by explaining why you don't know and possibly giving a general opinion or related information. Avoid repeating phrases like 'as someone from'.
예시: I'm not sure about Chinese kids because I'm from Bangladesh, but in my country, many children enjoy going to the library.
문법
× I actually cannot answer this question because I do not know what the Chinese kids visit the library or not.
✓ I actually cannot answer this question because I do not know whether the Chinese kids visit the library or not.
The original sentence incorrectly uses 'what' to introduce a yes/no question. The correct word to use here is 'whether' to indicate uncertainty about an action. Using 'whether' properly connects the clause and clarifies the meaning.
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