Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use correct grammar and sentence structure to make your answer clearer. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I have often gone to the library since I was a child because the quiet environment helps me concentrate. Unlike cafes, where there are many distractions, the library allows me to focus fully on my studies.

제안: Improve your answer by using correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structure. Avoid confusing phrases and provide specific details with linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Usually, I study in the library because it is quieter than my dormitory. Sometimes, I also complete my assignments there since the peaceful environment helps me concentrate better.

제안: Focus on using past tense correctly and avoid unnecessary repetition. Make your answer more natural by organizing ideas logically and using linking words.

예시: Yes, I often went to the library as a child after school. I usually read comics there while waiting for my mom to pick me up, which helped me pass the time pleasantly.

제안: Use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar. Provide clear reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, many Chinese students often go to the library, especially during exam periods. I have noticed that it becomes very crowded, and sometimes I cannot find a place to study because of the high demand.

× Yes, I often go to the library since I was a kid.

✓ Yes, I have often gone to the library since I was a kid.

The sentence uses 'often go' with 'since I was a kid', which requires present perfect tense to indicate an action continuing from the past to present. Use 'have often gone' instead of 'often go'.

× I love to studying there because of the surrounding is so quiet.

✓ I love studying there because the surroundings are so quiet.

After 'love', the verb should be in the gerund form without 'to'. Also, 'surrounding' should be plural 'surroundings' and 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural noun.

× because of the surrounding is so quiet.

✓ because the surroundings are so quiet.

The phrase 'because of the surrounding is so quiet' is incorrect. 'Because' should be followed by a clause without 'of'. Also, 'surroundings' is plural and needs plural verb 'are'.

× It make me can concentrate and forget with my studies and the thing that I want to do because sometimes if you go to study at cafe or whatever, there are so many.

✓ It helps me concentrate and forget about my studies and other things I want to do because sometimes if you go to study at a cafe or elsewhere, there are too many distractions.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and awkward structure. 'It make me can concentrate' should be 'It helps me concentrate'. 'Forget with' should be 'forget about'. Also, 'at cafe or whatever' needs an article and clearer wording.

× When I go to the library, sometimes I go to study Once Upon a time, but sometimes I also went there for doing my work, because sometimes doing it in my dormitory there is a lot of noise and distraction that make me concentrate.

✓ When I go to the library, sometimes I go to study, but sometimes I also went there to do my work because sometimes doing it in my dormitory involves a lot of noise and distractions that make it hard for me to concentrate.

The sentence mixes tenses and has awkward phrasing. 'For doing my work' should be 'to do my work'. 'That make me concentrate' should be 'that make it hard for me to concentrate' for clarity.

× Yes, I often go to the library when I was a kid after I finished my class I went there so many times.

✓ Yes, I often went to the library when I was a kid. After I finished my class, I went there many times.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'go' with past time 'when I was a kid'. It should be past tense 'went'. Also, the sentence is a run-on and needs to be split for clarity.

× I think that I went there every day because when I waiting for my mom to pick me up I just went there to find some comics or like something to read for kill the time for wedding to for many.

✓ I think that I went there every day because when I was waiting for my mom to pick me up, I just went there to find some comics or something to read to kill time.

'When I waiting' should be 'when I was waiting' (past continuous). The phrase 'for kill the time for wedding to for many' is unclear and corrected to 'to kill time'.

× I study in Chinese university.

✓ I study at a Chinese university.

The correct preposition for institutions like universities is 'at'. Also, 'Chinese university' needs an article 'a'.

× I found that every time that this examination period there's so many Chinese students go to the library.

✓ I found that every time during the examination period, there are so many Chinese students going to the library.

'There's so many' is incorrect; 'there are so many' is correct for plural noun 'students'. Also, 'go to the library' should be 'going to the library' for continuous action.

× Sometimes I also want to go there, but there is no any space for me to study because the city.

✓ Sometimes I also want to go there, but there is no space for me to study because of the city.

'No any space' is incorrect; use 'no space'. Also, 'because the city' is incomplete; 'because of the city' is more appropriate but still unclear; it might be better to specify the reason more clearly.