Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'addicted in reading books' nên là 'addicted to reading books'. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ như 'borrow the borrow'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic giữa các ý.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library because I am addicted to reading. I usually visit at least twice a week with my friends to borrow my favorite books and chat with them.

제안: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp như 'favorite dance' (có thể bạn muốn nói 'favorite genre'). Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và tránh lặp từ như 'I'm'.

예시: In the library, I usually look for my favorite books, especially romance novels. Besides reading, I also socialize with my friends and do my homework there.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng như 'both songs' không phù hợp, 'as a children' nên là 'as a child'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng thì quá khứ đơn và câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng.

예시: Yes, I loved reading when I was a child. I used to go to the library twice a month to borrow books.

제안: Bạn nên tránh nói 'I don't know much' mà nên trả lời tự tin hơn. Ngoài ra, cần chú ý ngữ pháp như 'focused on the educations' nên là 'focused on education' và 'go and reading book' nên là 'go and read books'.

예시: Although I am Vietnamese and not very familiar with Chinese children, I believe they often go to the library because China places a strong emphasis on education and encourages reading.

× Yes, of course I'm addicted in reading books so go to the library at least twice a week with my friends to borrow the borrow my favorite book and also gossip with each other.

✓ Yes, of course I'm addicted to reading books so I go to the library at least twice a week with my friends to borrow my favorite books and also gossip with each other.

The correct preposition after 'addicted' is 'to', not 'in'. Also, 'borrow the borrow my favorite book' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'borrow my favorite books'. Additionally, the subject 'I' is missing before 'go'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× In the library and always find my favorite dance or book I'm I'm interested in the romance ones and also I'm gossiping my friends, socializing with them and doing my homework.

✓ In the library, I always find my favorite dance or book. I'm interested in the romance ones and also gossip with my friends, socialize with them, and do my homework.

The sentence lacks a subject and proper verb forms. 'Gossiping my friends' is incorrect; it should be 'gossip with my friends'. Also, 'and always find' needs a subject 'I'. The sentence is split for clarity and correct verb usage.

× As you can see, I'm an addicted person who favored reading both songs as a children. When I was a children, I would go to a library twice a month.

✓ As you can see, I'm an addicted person who favored reading both songs as a child. When I was a child, I would go to the library twice a month.

The word 'children' is plural and incorrect here; the singular 'child' should be used. Also, 'a library' is more appropriate than 'to a library' in this context. 'Both songs' is unclear but kept as is since it may be intended. These corrections fix singular/plural and article usage.

× I am a Vietnamese person so I don't know much about the Chinese kids, but I think yes, because China is a country which is focused on the educations and I think that they encourage their kids to go and reading book.

✓ I am a Vietnamese person so I don't know much about Chinese kids, but I think yes, because China is a country which is focused on education and I think that they encourage their kids to go and read books.

'The educations' is incorrect; 'education' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. Also, 'go and reading book' should be 'go and read books' to use the base verb form after 'and' and pluralize 'books'. These corrections improve noun usage and verb form.