Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains a small grammatical error and a slight lack of coherence. Try to avoid incomplete sentences and ensure your ideas flow smoothly by using linking words. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

예시: No, I don't often go to the library these days because of my busy schedule. However, when I was younger, I used to visit regularly because I enjoyed reading and appreciated the peaceful environment. Therefore, I would love to bring back this habit.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting minor grammatical errors and using linking words to connect ideas more smoothly. Also, try to be more specific about the book you pick and your feelings.

예시: When I visit the library, I usually start by browsing the thriller section because I love suspenseful and exciting stories. Then, I pick a new book that catches my eye and find a spot near the window. I enjoy reading there because it helps me concentrate and relax.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by adding linking words and correcting minor grammatical errors. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary to express your ideas.

예시: Yes, I used to go to the library very often when I was young because reading was one of my favorite hobbies. I especially enjoyed the quiet atmosphere and exploring new storybooks. Therefore, the library was a perfect place for me to concentrate on my books.

제안: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using linking words to connect your ideas and by providing more specific reasons or examples. Also, avoid generalizations without support.

예시: In my opinion, Chinese kids don't often go to the library nowadays because they find it boring and less engaging. Instead, many young people prefer playing outdoor games and participating in physical activities.

× However, I use When I was younger, I used to go to the library regularly because I enjoyed reading and appreciated the peaceful environment it offered.

✓ However, when I was younger, I used to go to the library regularly because I enjoyed reading and appreciated the peaceful environment it offered.

The sentence contains a sentence structure error due to the incorrect placement of 'I use' which disrupts the sentence flow. Removing 'I use' corrects the sentence structure and makes it grammatically correct.

× Then I pick the new one, which catches my eyes and find the spot near the window.

✓ Then I pick the new one, which catches my eye, and find a spot near the window.

The phrase 'catches my eyes' is incorrect because 'eye' should be singular in this idiomatic expression. Also, 'the spot' should be 'a spot' as it is not a specific spot previously mentioned. This corrects the singular/plural and article usage.

× Library was a perfect place for me to concentrate on my books.

✓ The library was a perfect place for me to concentrate on my books.

The noun 'Library' requires the definite article 'The' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'The' is an article error.