Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, and avoid redundancy. Also, pay attention to sentence structure and grammar, for example, 'The quiet environment in the library makes it easier for me to concentrate.'

예시: Yes, I often visit the library because I enjoy reading books on various subjects. Additionally, I like reading magazines there as they keep me updated with the latest trends and news. Moreover, the quiet environment helps me concentrate better.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks linking words. Try to combine ideas smoothly using linking words like 'and' or 'also'. Also, avoid repeating the same idea in different words.

예시: In the library, I usually read magazines and books to gain new knowledge. I also enjoy exploring different topics through the resources available there.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. For example, use past tense consistently and add linking words for coherence.

예시: No, I did not go to the library when I was a child because I usually preferred reading books at home instead.

제안: Your answer is honest but can be improved by making it more natural and concise. Avoid unnecessary words like 'so' after 'As'.

예시: I am Indian, so I am not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library.

× I enjoy reading books and that helps me to gain the knowledge on different subjects

✓ I enjoy reading books and that helps me to gain knowledge of different subjects

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'knowledge'. The correct preposition is 'of' when referring to knowledge about subjects. Also, 'the knowledge' is incorrect here; 'knowledge' is uncountable and does not need 'the'.

× The rest they keep me updated with the latest trends and news.

✓ They keep me updated with the latest trends and news.

The phrase 'The rest they' is redundant and incorrect. 'They' alone is sufficient as the subject of the sentence.

× The quiet environment is in the library makes it easier for me to concentrate.

✓ The quiet environment in the library makes it easier for me to concentrate.

The phrase 'is in the library' is incorrectly placed. The correct structure is 'The quiet environment in the library...'. The verb 'is' is unnecessary here.

× I usually read magazines and read some books to gain the knowledge there, and I also try to find new knowledge with the help of books in the library.

✓ I usually read magazines and some books to gain knowledge there, and I also try to find new knowledge with the help of books in the library.

The phrase 'read some books' is correct, but 'read magazines and read some books' is repetitive. Also, 'the knowledge' should be 'knowledge' as it is uncountable and does not need 'the'.

× No, I did not go to the library when I was a child and at that time I usually prefer to read books in my home rather than going to library.

✓ No, I did not go to the library when I was a child and at that time I usually preferred to read books at home rather than going to the library.

The verb 'prefer' should be in past tense 'preferred' to match the past time frame. Also, 'in my home' should be 'at home', and 'going to library' should be 'going to the library' with the definite article.

× As I am an Indian, so I do not know that the Chinese kids often go to the library.

✓ As I am an Indian, I do not know whether Chinese kids often go to the library.

Using both 'As' and 'so' together is redundant. Also, 'that' is incorrect here; 'whether' is appropriate to express uncertainty.