Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Not really, I usually study at home because it feels cozy and relaxing. However, I find it hard to concentrate when I am at the library.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward expressions. Use linking words to connect your ideas and improve sentence flow. Also, be more concise and avoid repetition.

예시: I usually borrow novels, such as Harry Potter, and magazines from the library. This helps me save money because borrowing is cheaper than buying books.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to organise your ideas clearly with correct grammar. Avoid vague phrases and explain your points with specific details.

예시: Definitely. When I was in elementary school, my mother often took me to the library to read children's novels and magazines. However, I was not very interested, so I felt it was a waste of time.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and unclear references.

예시: I think it is a stereotype that Chinese children often go to the library because their parents want them to study hard. In reality, some children visit libraries mainly because of the free air conditioning, comfortable environment, and free books.

× I think home made me feel very cozy and relaxing so I couldn't really focus on study when I was in library.

✓ I think home made me feel very cozy and relaxed so I couldn't really focus on studying when I was in the library.

The preposition 'in' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'focus on study' is incorrect; it should be 'focus on studying' because 'focus on' is followed by a gerund form. Additionally, 'relaxing' should be 'relaxed' to correctly describe the feeling.

× I usually borrow some novels like for Harry Potter or some magazine in the library.

✓ I usually borrow some novels like Harry Potter or some magazines in the library.

The phrase 'like for Harry Potter' is incorrect; 'like Harry Potter' is sufficient. Also, 'magazine' should be plural 'magazines' to match 'some'.

× I think spending money on the magazine and novel is not a wise choice.

✓ I think spending money on magazines and novels is not a wise choice.

'The magazine and novel' implies specific items, but here it refers generally, so plural forms 'magazines and novels' are appropriate. Also, no article is needed before plural nouns in this context.

× You can borrow it from library so it can really reduce your book cost.

✓ You can borrow them from the library so it can really reduce your book costs.

'It' is incorrect because 'magazines and novels' are plural, so 'them' should be used. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Book cost' should be plural 'book costs' to indicate multiple expenses.

× When I was studying elementary school, my mom always took me to the library to watch some like fashion movie or some kid novel, children magazine, some kind of lad.

✓ When I was studying at elementary school, my mom always took me to the library to watch some fashion movies or read some kids' novels and children's magazines, some kind of lad.

'Studying elementary school' requires the preposition 'at'. 'Watch some like fashion movie' is incorrect; it should be 'watch some fashion movies'. 'Kid novel' should be 'kids' novels' and 'children magazine' should be 'children's magazines' to show possession. The phrase 'some kind of lad' is unclear and may be an error in meaning.

× But I really saw that it was a waste of time because I'm always not very interested in.

✓ But I really felt that it was a waste of time because I was never very interested in it.

The sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'I'm always not very interested in' lacks an object and proper tense. It should be 'I was never very interested in it' to match past tense and complete the thought.

× I think it's a stereotypes like Chinese parents want Chinese students or children to study more and more to get a, but it's not really the fact that they often go to the library.

✓ I think it's a stereotype that Chinese parents want Chinese students or children to study more and more to get ahead, but it's not really true that they often go to the library.

'It's a stereotypes' is incorrect; 'stereotypes' is plural, so it should be 'a stereotype'. The phrase 'to get a' is incomplete; likely intended 'to get ahead'. 'It's not really the fact that' is awkward; 'it's not really true that' is better.

× Some people often go to the library because of the free air conditioner and the free environment, free coach and the free books.

✓ Some people often go to the library because of the free air conditioning, the free environment, free coaching, and the free books.

'Air conditioner' refers to the device; 'air conditioning' refers to the service or condition. 'Free coach' is unclear; likely intended 'free coaching'. Also, articles are needed before some nouns for clarity.