Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid repetition and filler words like "uh". Provide a clear and concise answer with a topic sentence and supporting detail. For example, say "Yes, I often go to the library to borrow books because I enjoy reading and it is a quiet place to study."

예시: Yes, I often go to the library to borrow books because I enjoy reading and it provides a quiet environment for studying.

제안: Avoid filler words and try to link your ideas smoothly. Use linking words like "and" or "also" to connect your points. Be more specific about the types of books or activities. For example, "I usually borrow children's books for my kids because they enjoy stories about animals. We also read novels and magazines together because the library is a quiet place."

예시: I usually borrow children's books for my kids because they enjoy stories about animals. We also read novels and magazines together since the library is a quiet place.

제안: The phrase "enjoyed very well" is unnatural. Use simpler and more natural expressions like "I really enjoyed going to the library as a child." Also, avoid redundancy like "various different kinds"; just say "various kinds" or "different kinds."

예시: Yes, I really enjoyed going to the library as a child. I used to read different kinds of novels and magazines.

제안: Try to provide an opinion or some information even if you are unsure. You can say "I think many Chinese kids go to the library because schools encourage reading, but some may prefer digital books." Also, avoid short answers without elaboration.

예시: I think many Chinese kids go to the library because schools encourage reading, but some may prefer digital books nowadays.

× I'm not sure whether Chinese kids go to library or not.

✓ I'm not sure whether Chinese kids go to the library or not.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library' in a general sense, the definite article 'the' is required. Therefore, it should be 'go to the library'. This is an article error (ID 22).