Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, for example, "I used to go to the library often when I was a student because my school provided a library period. I enjoyed reading interesting books there." Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

예시: I often went to the library during my school days because we had a dedicated library period. I enjoyed reading various interesting books there, which helped me learn new things.

제안: Your answer is confusing and has many grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer clearly with linking words. For example, "When I go to the library, I usually read books or comic books to relax my mind from academic stress. Moreover, since the library rules require silence, I avoid chatting with friends there."

예시: When I visit the library, I usually read books or comic books to refresh my mind from academic stress. Also, because the library requires silence, I do not talk with my friends there.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to answer directly and add supporting details with linking words. For example, "Yes, when I was a kid, my school arranged special library lessons to help us improve vocabulary and grammar. During these lessons, we read various books."

예시: Yes, I went to the library as a child. My school organized special library lessons to help us improve our vocabulary and grammar, and we read different books during those sessions.

제안: Avoid negative self-comments and try to answer politely and clearly. Use linking words to organize your answer. For example, "I am not sure about Chinese kids' habits because I have not experienced it personally. However, I believe many Chinese children visit libraries since reading is popular."

예시: I am not certain about how often Chinese kids go to the library because I have not experienced it myself. However, I think many Chinese children visit libraries because reading is quite popular there.

× Honestly speaking, when I was in academics, I used to go to the library and a school provided once library period and I read interesting books there.

✓ Honestly speaking, when I was in academics, I used to go to the library and the school provided one library period and I read interesting books there.

The phrase 'a school provided once library period' is incorrect. 'Once' should be 'one' to indicate a single period, and 'a school' should be 'the school' to specify the particular school. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× As when I went to liberty, I used to read books and do some comic book read some comic books so that my fresh the mind from academics stress and however the note is written there keep silent, so I stopped chanting with my friend.

✓ When I went to the library, I used to read books and some comic books to refresh my mind from academic stress. However, since the note said to keep silent, I stopped chatting with my friend.

Several errors: 'liberty' should be 'library'; 'do some comic book read some comic books' is redundant and incorrect; 'my fresh the mind' should be 'refresh my mind'; 'academics stress' should be 'academic stress'; 'chanting' should be 'chatting'. Also, sentence structure was confusing and needed rephrasing for clarity.

× A school made a school provided a separate lesson for library to improve our vocabulary and grammar, so we read the books there.

✓ The school provided a separate lesson for the library to improve our vocabulary and grammar, so we read books there.

The phrase 'A school made a school provided' is redundant and incorrect. 'The school' is more appropriate to specify the particular school. 'The books' can be simplified to 'books' unless referring to specific books. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× As I am an idiot, I don't know about Chinese people, I've never went through there so I can't say, but according to me they should also have gone to library for reading the books as it is very popular.

✓ As I am not sure, I don't know about Chinese people. I've never been there, so I can't say, but in my opinion, they should also go to the library to read books as it is very popular.

'I've never went' is incorrect; the correct past participle is 'been'. 'Gone to library' should be 'go to the library' to express a general statement. Also, 'As I am an idiot' is inappropriate and replaced with 'As I am not sure' for politeness and clarity.