Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích ngắn gọn với các chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I don't often go to the library because I am usually busy. However, I prefer to search for information online at home, which is more convenient for me.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với cấu trúc câu rõ ràng, tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác và lặp lại. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về hoạt động trong thư viện.

예시: If I go to the library, I usually read books there. Sometimes, I borrow expensive books instead of buying them to save money.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ một cách chính xác và câu trả lời cần ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để mô tả cảm xúc và lý do cụ thể.

예시: I didn't often go to the library as a child because I was very energetic and my family worried I couldn't stay quiet. However, I always wanted to visit because the atmosphere seemed cozy and welcoming.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý kiến. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và làm rõ ý bằng cách sử dụng các liên từ và chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

예시: China has a long educational tradition, so many Chinese children often visit libraries. It has become a common hobby for them to study and learn new things there.

× I don't usually go to the library because I don't have much time to go to it.

✓ I don't usually go to the library because I don't have much time to go there.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used with 'go to it'. The correct phrase is 'go there' when referring to a place already mentioned. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× Uh, in spite of it, I can stay at home and go on to search on my chest, CPT or certain entity for the information.

✓ Uh, despite that, I can stay at home and continue to search on my chest, CPT, or certain entity for the information.

The phrase 'in spite of it' is awkward and incorrect here; 'despite that' is more appropriate. Also, 'go on to search on' is incorrect; 'continue to search' is better. The preposition 'on' after 'search' is unnecessary or incorrect depending on context. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× Or I will read many Facebook on the Internet so that I can read a book instead of go to the library.

✓ Or I will read many posts on Facebook on the Internet so that I can read a book instead of going to the library.

'Read many Facebook' is incorrect; it should be 'read many posts on Facebook'. Also, 'instead of go' should be 'instead of going'. This involves incorrect use of prepositions and verb forms (ID 11 and 8).

× if I was in the library, I would just reading a book and I want to find some book at a different site in the bookstore.

✓ If I were in the library, I would just read a book and I would want to find some books at a different site in the bookstore.

The conditional 'if I was' should be 'if I were' for subjunctive mood. 'Would just reading' is incorrect; it should be 'would just read'. Also, 'I want' should be 'I would want' to match conditional mood. 'Some book' should be plural 'some books'. This includes past tense issue (ID 5), verb + -ing form (ID 8), and singular/plural issue (ID 1).

× And maybe this book maybe is, uh, really have a high cost, so I will borrow it from the library so I can, uh, save my money.

✓ And maybe this book has a high cost, so I will borrow it from the library to save my money.

'Maybe is really have' is incorrect; 'has' is the correct verb for singular subject. 'Save my money' is better than 'so I can save my money' for conciseness. This is a third person singular issue (ID 2).

× When I was a kid, I didn't usually go to the library because I'm active and energetic kid, so maybe I don't make sure that I can keep quiet in the library so that my mom and my family didn't allow me to go to the library.

✓ When I was a kid, I didn't usually go to the library because I was an active and energetic kid, so maybe I wasn't sure that I could keep quiet in the library, so my mom and my family didn't allow me to go to the library.

Mixing present tense 'I'm' with past context is incorrect; it should be 'I was'. 'Don't make sure' should be 'wasn't sure'. 'Can keep' should be 'could keep' to match past tense. This is a present tense issue (ID 6) and past tense issue (ID 5).

× But I when I was a kid, I really want to go to the library because of their loving and cosy atmosphere.

✓ But when I was a kid, I really wanted to go to the library because of its loving and cosy atmosphere.

'I really want' should be past tense 'wanted' to match past context. 'Their' is incorrect for 'library' which is singular; 'its' is correct. This is incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12) and past tense issue (ID 5).

× Chinese is a country with a really long term educational traditions, so from my point of view I think the Chinese kids often go to the library like traditional and become a hobbies to practice and to learn new things.

✓ China is a country with a really long-term educational tradition, so from my point of view, I think Chinese kids often go to the library as a tradition and it becomes a hobby to practice and learn new things.

'Chinese' as a country is incorrect; 'China' is correct. 'Long term educational traditions' should be 'long-term educational tradition' (singular). 'Like traditional' is incorrect; 'as a tradition' is correct. 'Become a hobbies' should be 'becomes a hobby'. This involves singular/plural issue (ID 1), incorrect use of adjectives (ID 13), and sentence structure errors (ID 26).