Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use present tense consistently and avoid mixing past and present. Also, make your answer more natural and complete by adding a reason and linking words. For example, say "I don't usually go to the library, but when I need some information, I go there because it has many useful resources."

예시: I don't usually go to the library, but when I need some information, I go there because it has many useful resources that help me with my studies.

제안: Make your answer a complete sentence and use correct verb forms. Also, explain clearly what you do and give specific examples with linking words. For instance, "I usually search for business study books, such as those about business skills, selling techniques, and productivity, because they help me improve my knowledge."

예시: I usually search for business study books, such as those about business skills, selling techniques, and productivity, because they help me improve my knowledge.

제안: Use correct grammar and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add supporting details with linking words. For example, "When I was a kid, my school had a library with many types of books, including historical and fictional ones. I liked fictional books because they helped me learn about different stories, and history books deepened my understanding of the past."

예시: When I was a kid, my school had a library with many types of books, including historical and fictional ones. I liked fictional books because they helped me learn about different stories, and history books deepened my understanding of the past.

제안: Avoid repeating the same ideas and use more precise language. Also, provide a clear reason with linking words. For example, "Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they value education and want to gain more knowledge from books."

예시: Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they value education and want to gain more knowledge from books.

× Not usually, but when I need some information I went to the library.

✓ Not usually, but when I need some information I go to the library.

The sentence mixes present tense 'need' with past tense 'went'. Since the action is habitual, both verbs should be in present tense for consistency.

× Searching for a business study book like a business skills, selling skills, productivity and California connectivity.

✓ I usually search for business study books like business skills, selling skills, productivity, and California connectivity.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it a fragment. Adding 'I usually search' corrects the sentence structure and clarifies the meaning.

× I we have a library in our school that have many types of books like historical and fictional.

✓ We have a library in our school that has many types of books like historical and fictional.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'I we' and 'have' with singular subject 'library'. Correct subject is 'we' and verb 'has' agrees with singular 'library'.

× I liked quite a fictional is a very good for me to know about the fiction.

✓ I quite liked fiction; it is very good for me to learn about stories.

The phrase 'quite a fictional' is incorrect; 'fiction' is a noun, not an adjective. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correct adjective use.

× Also the history made me a little bit deep.

✓ Also, history made me think more deeply.

The original sentence is unclear and awkward. 'Made me a little bit deep' is incorrect; the correction uses proper verb and adverb to express the intended meaning.

× Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they are very intelligent and they are very smart and they have so much knowledge because they are they visit library often.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids often go to the library because they are very intelligent and smart, and they have a lot of knowledge because they visit the library often.

The sentence has redundant pronouns and missing articles. Removing repeated 'they are' and adding 'the' before 'library' improves clarity and grammar.