Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about the types of novels or story books you read.

예시: Yes, I often go to the library whenever I am free because I enjoy reading various types of novels, especially mystery and adventure stories, which help me relax and divert my mind.

제안: Avoid filler words and repetition. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Usually, I spend my time in the library doing writing tasks and reading informative novels, such as history books, because they help me gain knowledge.

제안: Try to use past tense correctly and avoid repetition. Provide a clear and direct answer with supporting details using linking words.

예시: I don't clearly remember, but I often went to the library with my grandfather when I was a kid, and we used to read books together.

제안: Avoid hesitation and filler words. Express your opinion clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, correct word choice like 'perspective' instead of 'prospective' is important.

예시: Honestly, I am not sure about Chinese kids, but from my perspective, many Chinese people visit libraries during their free time, often bringing their children along.

× Ah well, whenever I'm free I like to I like to go to the library and in the library I read different type of novels and sometimes I like to read story books which helps me in divert my mind.

✓ Ah well, whenever I'm free I like to go to the library and in the library I read different types of novels and sometimes I like to read story books which help me divert my mind.

The phrase 'different type of novels' is incorrect because 'type' should be plural when referring to multiple kinds, so it should be 'different types of novels'. Also, 'story books which helps me' is incorrect because 'books' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' instead of 'helps'. This correction ensures subject-verb agreement and correct plural usage.

× Whenever I am free then I usually do do do some writing task in the library and read different type of knowledge novels so that I can gain knowledge through novels and history history books. That's why I prefer.

✓ Whenever I am free, I usually do some writing tasks in the library and read different types of knowledge novels so that I can gain knowledge through novels and history books. That's why I prefer it.

The phrase 'some writing task' should be plural 'some writing tasks' because 'some' implies more than one. Also, 'different type of knowledge novels' should be 'different types of knowledge novels' to match plural form. The repetition 'do do do' and 'history history' are errors and should be corrected. Adding 'it' at the end clarifies the sentence. These corrections improve plural usage and sentence clarity.

× Well, to be very honest, I do not remember, but my grandfather mostly go to the library. Then I also also go to the library with my grandfather for reading books.

✓ Well, to be very honest, I do not remember, but my grandfather mostly went to the library. Then I also went to the library with my grandfather to read books.

The question is about past habits, so the verbs should be in past tense. 'Go' should be 'went' to indicate past action. Also, 'also also' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'also'. 'For reading books' is better expressed as 'to read books' for correct infinitive usage.

× Ah well, whenever I'm free I like to I like to go to the library and in the library I read different type of novels and sometimes I like to read story books which helps me in divert my mind.

✓ Ah well, whenever I'm free I like to go to the library and in the library I read different types of novels and sometimes I like to read story books which help me divert my mind.

Repeated for clarity: 'different type of novels' should be 'different types of novels' to match plural form. 'Story books which helps me' should be 'story books which help me' because 'books' is plural and requires plural verb form.

× Well honestly I don't have any idea about the Chinese because I'm Indian and uh, according to my prospective, mostly Chinese go to the library when they are free and their kid also with them and they can also also visit.

✓ Well honestly I don't have any idea about the Chinese because I'm Indian and, according to my perspective, mostly Chinese go to the library when they are free and their kids are also with them and they can also visit.

The word 'prospective' is incorrect; the correct word is 'perspective' meaning viewpoint. 'Their kid also with them' is missing the verb 'are' to form 'their kids are also with them'. Also, 'kid' should be plural 'kids' to match 'they'. The repetition 'also also' is an error and should be corrected. These corrections improve word choice and sentence structure.