Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免使用多余的连接词“and”，并注意语法，如“at weekend”应为“on weekends”。句子结构应更自然简洁。

예시: Yes, I usually go to the library on weekends because it is a relaxing place for me.

제안: 回答中句子过长且结构混乱，应使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时注意语法，如“concentrate it better”应为“concentrate better”。内容应更具体。

예시: I usually do my homework in the library because it is very quiet, so I can concentrate better. After that, I like to read books about history and languages to relax.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，如“suggested us to go”应为“suggested that we go”。“bother our horizon”表达不准确，应为“broaden our horizons”。应避免口头语“umm”。

예시: Yes, I did. When I was in primary school, our Chinese teacher suggested that we go to the library to read more books because it would broaden our horizons and improve our grades.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“rig birds”应为“read books”。句子结构混乱，应简洁明了。注意冠词使用，如“have library”应为“have a library”。

예시: It depends. Many Chinese kids prefer to read books at home because not every area has a library, and traveling to the library can be unsafe for young children.

× I usually go to the library at weekend and for me library is like a relaxing place.

✓ I usually go to the library at weekends and for me the library is like a relaxing place.

“weekend” 应该用复数形式“weekends”，表示经常在周末去。名词“library”前需要加定冠词“the”，因为特指图书馆。

× I usually go to the library at weekend and for me library is like a relaxing place.

✓ I usually go to the library at weekends and for me the library is like a relaxing place.

“library”前面缺少定冠词“the”，因为这里指的是特定的图书馆。

× I often do my homework in the library because it's very quiet and I can concentrate it better and after that I will choose some books such as history, language and that I interested in and which I can relax myself.

✓ I often do my homework in the library because it's very quiet and I can concentrate better, and after that I will choose some books such as history and language that I am interested in and which help me relax.

“concentrate”后不需要宾语“it”，应直接用动词。短语“that I interested in”缺少动词“am”，应为“that I am interested in”。“which I can relax myself”表达不自然，改为“which help me relax”更合适。

× when I was in primary school our Chinese teacher suggested us to go to library to read read more books and she said it would umm bother our horizon and make our grades better.

✓ When I was in primary school, our Chinese teacher suggested that we go to the library to read more books, and she said it would broaden our horizons and improve our grades.

“suggested us to go”用法错误，应为“suggested that we go”。“library”前缺少定冠词“the”。“bother our horizon”用词错误，应为“broaden our horizons”。“make our grades better”表达不自然，改为“improve our grades”。

× when I was in primary school our Chinese teacher suggested us to go to library to read read more books and she said it would umm bother our horizon and make our grades better.

✓ When I was in primary school, our Chinese teacher suggested that we go to the library to read more books, and she said it would broaden our horizons and improve our grades.

“go to library”缺少定冠词“the”，应为“go to the library”。

× Chinese kids they most of the time they will choose to rig birds at home because not every district will have library and if they spend too much time on the way it will very dangerous for for most of the little kids.

✓ Chinese kids, most of the time, will choose to read books at home because not every district has a library, and if they spend too much time on the way, it will be very dangerous for most of the little kids.

“rig birds”应为“read books”，是拼写错误。名词“library”前缺少冠词“a”。“district will have library”应为“district has a library”，主谓一致和冠词使用错误。

× Chinese kids they most of the time they will choose to rig birds at home because not every district will have library and if they spend too much time on the way it will very dangerous for for most of the little kids.

✓ Chinese kids, most of the time, will choose to read books at home because not every district has a library, and if they spend too much time on the way, it will be very dangerous for most of the little kids.

“district will have library”中“district”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应为“has”而非“will have”，且“library”前应加冠词。