Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn hơn để tăng tính hiệu quả. Bạn cũng có thể thêm một vài từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I don't visit the library often because I study mostly at school and attend HR classes. However, on weekends, I sometimes go alone or with friends to relax and read quietly, which helps me unwind from a busy week.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ cho chính xác hơn, đồng thời câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết các ý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "allow me" nên là "allows me".

예시: I usually go to the library to find a quiet place where I can relax and read my favorite books. This helps me recharge after a busy week.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như "when I was a try" nên là "when I was a child", "attacking me" không đúng nghĩa. Bạn nên luyện tập cách dùng từ và cấu trúc câu để trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn.

예시: When I was a child, I didn't go to the library often because I wasn't allowed to go alone. My parents usually took me there so I could borrow my favorite books instead of buying them, which helped save money.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, "visit library" nên là "visit the library" và tránh lặp từ quá nhiều.

예시: I'm not entirely sure since I'm Vietnamese, but I've heard that Chinese children are very studious and often visit the library regularly. For them, going to the library is a common habit to study and complete homework, which reflects the importance of education in their country.

× I often go to library to find a place where allow me to relax and sometime reach many favorite books in a quiet environment and this is also a way to recharge my battery after a busy week.

✓ I often go to the library to find a place that allows me to relax and sometimes reach many favorite books in a quiet environment, and this is also a way to recharge my battery after a busy week.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'where allow me' should be 'that allows me' to correctly introduce a relative clause with subject-verb agreement. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' as an adverb meaning occasionally.

× I often go to library to find a place where allow me to relax and sometime reach many favorite books in a quiet environment and this is also a way to recharge my battery after a busy week.

✓ I often go to the library to find a place that allows me to relax and sometimes reach many favorite books in a quiet environment, and this is also a way to recharge my battery after a busy week.

The verb 'allow' needs to be in the third person singular form 'allows' to agree with the singular subject 'a place'. Also, 'reach' is incorrectly used; it should be 'read' or 'access' depending on intended meaning. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' as an adverb.

× When I was a try, I didn't go to the library very often because I was not allowed to go there alone, so my parents usually accompanied me and they preferred attacking me to the library so that I could borrow my favorite books instead of buying them, which help them save money.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't go to the library very often because I was not allowed to go there alone, so my parents usually accompanied me and they preferred taking me to the library so that I could borrow my favorite books instead of buying them, which helped them save money.

'Try' is incorrect; the correct word is 'child' to indicate age. 'Attacking' is a wrong word choice; the correct verb is 'taking'. 'Help' should be in past tense 'helped' to agree with the past context.

× I'm not entirely sure since I'm Vietnamese, but I've heard that Chinese children are very studious and often visit library regularly.

✓ I'm not entirely sure since I'm Vietnamese, but I've heard that Chinese children are very studious and often visit the library regularly.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known in context.

× Going to the library is considered as a common habit for them to study and do their homework.

✓ Going to the library is considered a common habit for them to study and do their homework.

The preposition 'as' is unnecessary after 'considered'. The correct phrase is 'considered a common habit' without 'as'.

× They show how important education in their country.

✓ They show how important education is in their country.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to complete the clause 'how important education is'. Without it, the sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical.