Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は自然ですが、最後の文が不明瞭で冗長です。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、5文以内にまとめましょう。例えば、「Therefore, I prefer using my phone to visit the library.」のように締めると良いです。

예시: No, I don't often go to the library because I can easily read books, comics, and newspapers on my phone. For example, many apps let me access events and online magazines anytime and anywhere. Therefore, I prefer using my phone to visit the library.

제안: 内容は良いですが、文法の誤り（help → helps）と「living there」の表現が不自然です。より自然な表現に直し、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げましょう。

예시: I usually read novels when I go to the library because they provide useful information and new vocabulary. Moreover, reading novels helps me improve my thinking skills and understand different perspectives. That's why I enjoy spending time there.

제안: 過去の話なので「we could read」より「I could read」が適切です。また、「made me easy to find」は文法的に誤りです。より自然な表現に修正しましょう。

예시: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I could read many books and articles on my phone. It was very convenient, so I didn't feel the need to visit the library often. Also, the Internet made it easy for me to find information quickly.

제안: 回答が不完全で意味が伝わりません。質問に対して直接的かつ具体的な答えを簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。

예시: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library because it helps them study and find useful books for their education.

× Reading novels also help me improve my thinking skill and understand different things.

✓ Reading novels also helps me improve my thinking skills and understand different things.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'Reading novels'. Also, 'skill' should be plural 'skills' because it refers to multiple abilities.

× That's why I enjoy spending the time living there.

✓ That's why I enjoy spending time living there.

The phrase 'spending the time' is incorrect here; 'spending time' is the correct expression without the definite article 'the'.

× No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because we could read many books and articles on my phone.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because we could read many books and articles on our phones.

The pronoun 'my' is incorrect when referring to 'we'; it should be 'our' to match the plural subject.

× Also, the Internet made me easy to find information quickly.

✓ Also, the Internet made it easy for me to find information quickly.

The phrase 'made me easy' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'made it easy for me' to express that the Internet facilitated finding information.