Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Try to avoid redundancy and use simpler, clearer expressions. For example, say "No, I don't go often because I usually find the information I need on the Internet."

예시: No, I don't go to the library often because I usually find the information I need on the Internet.

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and incomplete. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid grammatical errors and finish your sentences.

예시: People usually go to the library to find books and read them. Additionally, some visit because the quiet environment inspires learning.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains tense errors. Use past tense consistently when talking about the past. Also, try to make your sentences more concise and natural.

예시: Yes, I went to the library very often when I was a kid because there was no Internet, and it was difficult to find the books I needed.

제안: Your answer is honest but could be improved by using correct grammar and linking your ideas more clearly. Try to say, "I am not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library, but I think many people nowadays use the Internet or online libraries instead."

예시: I am not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library, but I think many people nowadays use the Internet or online libraries instead.

× People are usually go there to find a book and read it, but maybe some of them go because it is an environment which inspires people to learn something new and.

✓ People usually go there to find a book and read it, but maybe some of them go because it is an environment which inspires people to learn something new.

The phrase 'are usually go' is incorrect because 'go' should not be in the base form after 'are'. The correct form is 'People usually go' without 'are'. Also, the sentence ends with 'and' which is incomplete and should be removed for clarity.

× Yes, I definitely go to the library very often when I was a kid because at that time there was no Internet and it was really difficult to get some books which I needed.

✓ Yes, I definitely went to the library very often when I was a kid because at that time there was no Internet and it was really difficult to get some books which I needed.

The verb 'go' should be in the past tense 'went' to match the past time frame indicated by 'when I was a kid'. Using present tense 'go' here is incorrect.

× I think nowadays in every country people using Internet or online library.

✓ I think nowadays in every country people use the Internet or online libraries.

The phrase 'people using' is incorrect; it should be 'people use' to form a proper present tense statement. Also, 'Internet' should have the definite article 'the' before it, and 'online library' should be pluralized to 'online libraries' to match the context.