Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些冗长且表达不够自然，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，同时注意语法错误，如主谓一致。可以直接回答问题，然后简要说明原因。

예시: I don't often go to the library because I prefer studying at home where I feel more comfortable and relaxed.

제안: 回答内容较好，但句子结尾不完整且有语法错误。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并注意句子完整性。

예시: I usually complete urgent tasks in the library because it helps me concentrate better and improve my efficiency.

제안: 回答较完整，但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词。建议分句表达，并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

예시: I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I was very extroverted. I preferred playing outside or visiting places like the zoo rather than staying in quiet places.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“let them to go”应为“let them go”，且表达略显口语化。建议使用更正式的表达，并注意语法准确。

예시: Yes, I think Chinese children often go to the library because their parents encourage them to complete homework and do extra exercises to improve their academic performance.

× Now I seldom go to the library because I am not such a hard working person who always go to the library to further his or her study.

✓ Now I seldom go to the library because I am not such a hard-working person who always goes to the library to further his or her study.

主语是单数的"person"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"goes"，而不是复数形式"go"。

× I usually complete urgent tasks in the library. For example, I always complete my essays with the pressing deadline because I can be more concentrated and it can improve my efficiency with.

✓ I usually complete urgent tasks in the library. For example, I always complete my essays with pressing deadlines because I can concentrate better and it can improve my efficiency.

"with the pressing deadline"中的冠词"the"不合适，应去掉；"be more concentrated"表达不自然，改为"concentrate better"更符合英语习惯；句尾的"with"多余，应删除。

× So many parents just let them to go to the library to complete the homework or do some extra exercises to improve their performance.

✓ So many parents just let them go to the library to complete the homework or do some extra exercises to improve their performance.

动词"let"后面直接跟动词原形，不加"to"，因此"let them to go"应改为"let them go"。