Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "very really often" and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I don't go to the library often now because I usually buy the books I need. However, when I was a student, I visited the library about once a week to read various books.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and completeness. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to explain your experience clearly. Avoid repetition and finish your thoughts.

예시: Usually, I read books in the library. For example, when I was a student, I once found a rare economics book that was hard to find elsewhere. Since there was only one copy, I spent the whole day reading it there.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Use linking words and correct article usage to improve fluency.

예시: I didn't go to the library much as a kid because we had many books at home, including children's books. Therefore, I read a lot while staying at home.

제안: Your answer is vague and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more specific and use linking words to express your opinion clearly and naturally.

예시: Although I don't have detailed information about Chinese children, I believe that since China is a developed country with advanced technology, many kids often visit libraries to gather more information.

× Not really, and for now I don't go to library because I buy books I need.

✓ Not really, and for now I don't go to the library because I buy the books I need.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Similarly, 'books I need' should have 'the' to specify particular books.

× But when I was a student I had to go to library very really often.

✓ But when I was a student I had to go to the library very often.

Again, 'library' needs the definite article 'the'. Also, 'very really often' is incorrect; 'very often' is the correct adverbial phrase to express frequency.

× I think once in a week I was in library and reading various books.

✓ I think once a week I was in the library reading various books.

'Once a week' is the correct expression for frequency. 'Library' requires 'the'. Also, 'was in library and reading' is better expressed as 'was in the library reading' to avoid awkwardness.

× Usually in library I read books.

✓ Usually in the library I read books.

'Library' is a singular countable noun and needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× I remember there was a book when I was a student about economics and I could not find anywhere.

✓ I remember there was a book about economics when I was a student that I could not find anywhere else.

The sentence structure was awkward. Adding 'that' clarifies the relative clause. Also, 'anywhere' is better specified as 'anywhere else' to indicate uniqueness.

× And in library there was only one, one book, one copy of this book and the whole days I will.

✓ And in the library there was only one book, one copy of this book, and I would spend whole days reading it.

'Library' needs 'the'. The phrase 'the whole days I will' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I would spend whole days reading it' to express habitual past action.

× When I was a kid, I never went to library because we had books, a lot of books at home and books for kids.

✓ When I was a kid, I never went to the library because we had a lot of books at home, including books for kids.

'Library' requires 'the'. Also, 'a lot of books' is better placed before 'books' for clarity.

× We are in our house so I read a lot books.

✓ We were at home, so I read a lot of books.

Since the sentence refers to the past ('When I was a kid'), the verb 'are' should be past tense 'were'. Also, 'a lot of books' is the correct quantifier phrase.

× I do not have any information about Chinese people, Chinese children, but as China is well developed country and there are many technologies, I think that they often go to libraries to to receive more information about some.

✓ I do not have any information about Chinese people or Chinese children, but as China is a well-developed country with many technologies, I think that they often go to libraries to receive more information about various topics.

The sentence had pronoun and article errors: 'well developed country' needs 'a' and hyphenation 'well-developed'. 'Many technologies' is acceptable but 'with many technologies' is better. 'To to receive' is a typo. 'About some' is incomplete; 'about various topics' is clearer.