Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'library' multiple times, use pronouns or synonyms. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes like 'you can study without a distraction' to 'you can study without distractions'.

예시: Yes, I have been going to the library recently because I have a final exam. It is a quiet place where I can study without distractions, and it is convenient since I don't need to buy any books.

제안: Try to form complete sentences and avoid short fragments. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide clear reasons. Also, use correct plural forms like 'homework' (uncountable) and 'group work' (uncountable).

예시: I usually do my assignments and group work in the library because there is free Wi-Fi, which makes it more convenient to complete and submit my tasks.

제안: Improve your grammar by using correct verb forms, for example, 'My father took us'. Avoid filler words like 'yeah' and incomplete sentences. Provide more specific details to enrich your answer.

예시: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a child. My father took us there to read many children's books such as Cinderella and Frozen. It is a quiet and fond memory that helped us develop a love for reading.

제안: Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'I don't have any information'. Instead, give a brief opinion or say you are not sure politely. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid filler words like 'so yeah' and 'sorry'.

예시: I'm not sure about that, but I think many Chinese children probably go to the library because it is a common place for studying and reading.

× Yes, recently I've been going to the library often because I have a final exam to attend and it's a quiet place and you can study without a distraction.

✓ Yes, recently I've been going to the library often because I have a final exam to attend and it's a quiet place where you can study without distractions.

The phrase 'without a distraction' is incorrect because 'distraction' is a countable noun and here it should be plural to indicate the absence of any distractions in general. Using 'distractions' is more natural and grammatically correct in this context.

× I usually use the library to do my assignment. My homeworks.

✓ I usually use the library to do my assignments. My homework.

'Assignment' should be plural 'assignments' if referring to multiple tasks. However, 'homework' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'homeworks'. The correct form is 'homework'.

× A lot of group works that I have to submit because there's a free Wi-Fi there, so it's more convenient to do that in the library and.

✓ A lot of group work that I have to submit because there's free Wi-Fi there, so it's more convenient to do that in the library.

'Group work' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'group works'. Also, 'Wi-Fi' is uncountable and does not need the article 'a'. Removing 'a' before 'free Wi-Fi' is correct.

× My father take us to the library to read a lot of children books like Cinderella, Frozen.

✓ My father took us to the library to read a lot of children's books like Cinderella, Frozen.

The verb 'take' should be in the past tense 'took' to match the past time frame. Also, 'children books' should be 'children's books' to show possession.

× And it's a quiet memory. It's it's it's it help us to.

✓ And it's a quiet memory. It helped us a lot.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive. Correcting it to a complete sentence with proper past tense verb 'helped' and removing unnecessary repetitions improves clarity and grammatical correctness.