Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答不够自然，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，避免语法错误，并且用连贯的句子表达观点。

예시: I don't often go to the library because I usually use my smartphone to find the books I want. Also, I often work overtime, so I have little free time to visit the library.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，句子不完整。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达原因，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: When I go to the library, I usually look for books that interest me and read them there because the library is a quiet place that provides a peaceful environment.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用连贯的句子说明原因。

예시: Yes, I often went to the library as a child because I didn't have a smartphone, and the library offered a wide variety of books to read.

제안: 回答表达不够准确，部分词汇使用错误。建议用更准确的词汇和句子表达观点，并保持句子连贯。

예시: I think it depends on the child. Some Chinese kids enjoy reading and like to go to the library for a quiet environment, but others are not interested in reading.

× Actually how did it go to library for?

✓ Actually, why did you go to the library?

这里使用了错误的时态和句式，正确表达过去的动作应该用过去时态的疑问句，且句子结构应完整。

× Actually how did it go to library for?

✓ Actually, why did you go to the library?

介词使用错误，'go to library for'结构不正确，应该用'go to the library'，并用'why'引导疑问句。

× On the one hand, nowadays I can use my smartphone to re research the book that I want to read.

✓ On the one hand, nowadays I can use my smartphone to research the book that I want to read.

're research'是重复错误，应去掉多余的're'，使动词形式正确。

× On the other hand I often get the over overtime in my.

✓ On the other hand, I often work overtime.

'get the over overtime in my'结构混乱且用词错误，应简化为'I often work overtime'，表达加班的意思。

× Well, when I go to the library, I usually to seek the book that I really interested in and I stay there to read it because it can.

✓ Well, when I go to the library, I usually seek the books that I am really interested in and stay there to read them because it is a quiet place.

'usually to seek'中不需要不定式to，'interested in'前应有be动词，'it can'句子不完整，需补充完整表达。

× Well, when I go to the library, I usually to seek the book that I really interested in and I stay there to read it because it can.

✓ Well, when I go to the library, I usually seek the books that I am really interested in and stay there to read them because it is a quiet place.

单复数不一致，'book'应为复数'books'，'it'指代不明确，应改为'them'指代复数书籍。

× It's because it's a quiet place and provide a peaceful environment for me.

✓ It's because it's a quiet place and provides a peaceful environment for me.

主语是单数'it'，谓语动词应加-s，变为'provides'。

× Yes, at that time I didn't get the smartphone, so when I want to read some books and I will, I will choose to the library and because it can provide various books.

✓ Yes, at that time I didn't have a smartphone, so when I wanted to read some books, I would choose the library because it could provide various books.

时态不一致，描述过去的动作应使用过去时，'didn't get'应为'didn't have'，'want'改为'wanted'，'will choose'改为'would choose'，'can provide'改为'could provide'。

× Yes, at that time I didn't get the smartphone, so when I want to read some books and I will, I will choose to the library and because it can provide various books.

✓ Yes, at that time I didn't have a smartphone, so when I wanted to read some books, I would choose the library because it could provide various books.

'choose to the library'中'choose'后不加介词'to'，应直接加宾语。

× There.

✓ There were many books.

单独的'There.'不是完整句子，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整表达。

× Well, I think it really depends on the kids.

✓ Well, I think it really depends on the kids.

此句无明显语法错误，保持原句。

× I mean, some kids really like reading and want to get a piece, a quiet environment, so they want to get a library.

✓ I mean, some kids really like reading and want to have a quiet environment, so they want to go to the library.

'get a piece, a quiet environment'表达不清，'get a library'错误，应改为'want to have a quiet environment'和'want to go to the library'。

× But some kids just don't want to read.

✓ But some kids just don't want to read.

此句无明显语法错误，保持原句。