Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lặp từ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my neighborhood. Besides, I can easily find books and do research on the Internet, so I prefer that.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng, sử dụng từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh những phần không liên quan như 'Goodbye'.

예시: If I go to the library, I usually choose interesting books that are different from my usual topics to research. Also, I like to observe other people studying there.

제안: Bạn cần sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách và tránh lặp lại từ không cần thiết. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tránh những phần không liên quan như 'Goodnight son'.

예시: When I was a kid, I never went to the library because I usually read books that my parents brought home. I also spent time watching TV.

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và tránh nhầm lẫn từ. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và cung cấp lý do cụ thể hơn.

예시: I think Chinese kids often go to the library because I often see them reading books there in TV shows and movies.

× I'm not often go to.

✓ I don't often go.

The verb 'go' should be in the base form after 'do not' for negative present tense sentences. 'I'm not often go to' is incorrect because 'am' is not used with 'go' in this structure.

× there's no library that near in in my neighborhood

✓ there's no library near my neighborhood

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary and repeated. 'Near' already indicates proximity, so 'in' should be removed for correct usage.

× I can easily to find the book and any other research in in the Internet

✓ I can easily find books and other research on the Internet

The infinitive 'to find' is incorrect after 'can easily'; it should be the base verb 'find'. Also, 'in in' is repeated and 'on the Internet' is the correct preposition.

× so I didn't go.

✓ so I don't go.

The context is about habitual action, so present tense 'don't go' is appropriate instead of past tense 'didn't go'.

× If I ever go to the library, I would choose some like interesting interesting book that that beyond all my other topics before to research and look around a lot of people.

✓ If I ever go to the library, I would choose some interesting books beyond all my previous topics to research and look around at a lot of people.

The sentence has repeated words and incorrect conjunctions. 'Like' is unnecessary before 'interesting books'. 'That that' is repeated. 'Before' should be 'previous'. 'Look around a lot of people' needs 'at' to be correct.

× When I was a kid, I never go to the library because I usually read books that my parents bring back.

✓ When I was a kid, I never went to the library because I usually read books that my parents brought back.

The past tense 'went' is required to match 'was'. 'Bring' should be past tense 'brought' to match the past context.

× and watching TV.

✓ and watched TV.

To maintain past tense consistency, 'watching' should be changed to past tense 'watched'.

× I guess so because I usually saw the kids Jenny kiss reading book in the library in TV and movies, so I guess so.

✓ I guess so because I usually see kids reading books in the library on TV and movies.

'Saw' is past tense but 'usually' indicates present habitual action, so 'see' is correct. 'Jenny kiss' is unclear and likely a mishearing; removed for clarity. 'Reading book' should be plural 'reading books'. Preposition 'in TV' should be 'on TV'.