Library— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating ideas. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. For example, mention how often you go and why, without unnecessary details about the book unless asked.

예시: I usually go to the library on weekends to read and relax after a busy week. I enjoy reading thrilling books like Harry Potter because they keep me engaged.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid vague phrases like 'right library' and 'talk to other questions'. Instead, clearly state your usual activities and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: I usually read books in the library, but sometimes I meet my friends there to have coffee and chat.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Use past tense consistently and complete your thoughts. Also, explain your situation clearly with linking words to improve coherence.

예시: When I was a kid, I lived in the countryside and there was no library near my house. However, I was able to read books on the Internet, which I really enjoyed.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons or examples. Use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I think many Chinese kids prefer playing games and watching movies rather than going to the library. They usually read light books or magazines, and some people say that reading books is not very popular among them.

× I usually go to the library on the weekend because I want to read book and relax after a working day.

✓ I usually go to the library on the weekend because I want to read books and relax after a working day.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading in general, which is countable and usually plural in this context.

× My favorite book is Harry Potter is really interesting and thrilling and I really love it.

✓ My favorite book is Harry Potter. It is really interesting and thrilling, and I really love it.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence. It needs to be split into two sentences or connected properly to improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I often read books in the right library, but other day I usually have a coffee with my friend and talk to other questions.

✓ I often read books in the library, but other days I usually have a coffee with my friend and talk about other things.

The phrase 'in the right library' is incorrect; 'in the library' is appropriate. 'Other day' should be plural 'other days' to indicate multiple occasions. 'Talk to other questions' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'talk about other things'.

× When I was a kid, I live in a countryside and I didn't have any library nearby my house, but I able to read book on the Internet and I really like the.

✓ When I was a kid, I lived in the countryside and I didn't have any library near my house, but I was able to read books on the Internet and I really liked them.

The verb 'live' should be in past tense 'lived' to match 'was'. 'A countryside' is incorrect; 'the countryside' is the correct phrase. 'Nearby my house' should be 'near my house'. 'Able to' needs the auxiliary verb 'was' to form 'was able to'. 'Read book' should be plural 'read books'. 'I really like the' is incomplete; it should be 'I really liked them' referring to the books.

× Add I can't remember that the Chinese kid really like playing games and watching movie.

✓ Also, I can't remember that Chinese kids really like playing games and watching movies.

'Add' is incorrect; 'Also' is appropriate. 'The Chinese kid' should be plural 'Chinese kids' to match the plural verb 'like'. 'Watching movie' should be plural 'watching movies'.

× They take the light reading book and some magazines say that the Chinese people don't want reading books.

✓ They take light reading books and some magazines say that Chinese people don't want to read books.

'The light reading book' should be plural 'light reading books' to match the context. 'The Chinese people' can be simplified to 'Chinese people'. 'Don't want reading books' is incorrect; the correct form is 'don't want to read books'.